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Stay - Russia/Estonia, breath play [Part 4] anonymous May 17 2010, 20:01:58 UTC

Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=10408898
"Russia/Any Baltic state, breath play (sans use of the scarf)".

I decided to go with Russia/Estonia. Hope this will be to the OP's satisfaction, if they're still around.

Stay [1/2] anonymous May 17 2010, 20:02:41 UTC

The setting sun made its way through the open window, the light thick as honey, painting all that it touched turned yellow-orange. Where its fingertips did not reach, long shadows lingered, growing steadily longer. As night slowly fell the scent of flowers was heavy in the air and crickets could be heard chirping in the grass outside ( ... )

Stay [2/2] anonymous May 17 2010, 20:03:21 UTC

He struggled a while beneath that touch. It was part of the game. Heated and dizzy and unable to breathe, he struggled as the hand on his throat tightened, as the broad palm covering his face pressed his head back into the pillow. Not enough. Too much. Almost too much. Then he stopped moving. One. Two. Three. Trembling, desperate. His lungs were burning ( ... )

not!OP but... anonymous May 17 2010, 20:20:16 UTC

Seriously will you marry me? I mean, you may have actually just pushed all my buttons right here and now. You are amazing, author!anon and I just...I...*babbles*

Captcha: Labor under. Oh. Em. Gee.

<3 anonymous May 17 2010, 20:34:08 UTC

Authoranon is so happy you liked it! I'd never written this pairing or this kink before so I was a bit unsure of myself, ahaha. ;;;

Re: Stay [2/2] anonymous May 17 2010, 21:18:11 UTC

I wouldn't have thought to ever read a breathplay fic that was actually beautiful, but this really, really was.

Also Estoniaaaaaaaa which was the reason why I read it despite the breathplay ^^° You really did both of them justice!

Re: Stay [2/2] anonymous May 18 2010, 01:43:29 UTC

I'm very glad you appreciate it even though it's a kink you normally wouldn't read <3
I love writing Estonia but this pairing is difficult for me, so I'm happy you thought it worked out right.

Re: Stay [2/2] anonymous May 18 2010, 16:05:21 UTC

This is beautifully written, authornon! Kudos to you!

Loving this fic with all my heart, especially how you weave the words and the feelings, the images, how they linger in my mind. Deliciously subtle, it won't let me go afterward <3
I'll make sure that the link is safely tucked inside my folder.

Re: Stay [2/2] anonymous May 18 2010, 18:31:34 UTC

asdfjk
Thank you, anon, for that lovely comment <3 Ahhhh I'm so so happy you liked it so much!

Re: Stay [2/2] anonymous February 27 2011, 00:11:01 UTC

My inner EstoniaxRussia fangirl bows to you. Here, have my firstborn child. You deserve it.
God that prose was beautiful. This is one of the best fills I have found this kink meme. Thank you thank you thank you aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhIloveyou.

Re: Stay [2/2] anonymous February 27 2011, 16:30:21 UTC

Oh, anon. I'm so flattered. <3
Glad you enjoyed it!

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