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[Part 9] [America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [1a/?] anonymous May 2 2010, 03:21:42 UTC
Original Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/12046.html?thread=27721998#t27721998Kiku could hear the blonde coming before he even arrived at the floor he was in. It wasn't that he was psychic and knew where his best friend was at all times, but just the fact that the American was loud. It was as if Alfred had a giant megaphone with him always. With so much warning, Kiku had more than enough time to stuff the pages he was working on into his bag and out of sight ( ... )

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[America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [1b/?] anonymous May 2 2010, 03:25:45 UTC
"Kiku!" The American suddenly said, snapping Kiku out of his thoughts. "Were you listening to me?!" He demanded ( ... )

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Re: [America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [1b/?] anonymous May 2 2010, 04:14:30 UTC
This makes me squee. Oh Kiku, using your manga to express yourself. Oh Al, you oblivious idiot, using poor Kiku as your math slave. ... That came out funny. >->;;

The beautiful irony that Al doesn't realize he's freaking out at the manga-ka is the funniest thing in quite a while. *snerk* It's made especially hilarious that most fanpeople in existance seem to have had that sentiment at one point. XD

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OP anonymous May 2 2010, 05:42:17 UTC
Wow I'm loving it so much! Gosh darn, Al is so adorable! XD

"Any ways, I was thinking, since you're Japanese, you must have some connection to this author! So set us up so I can talk some sense into her about this scene! I mean, really!"

I was laughing so hard reading this line! XDD
Alfred makes it sound like Japan's a small town ;D

It amuses me how Kiku tries to hide his manga character's real identites without revealing too much but by dropping obvious hints who they realy are.

This is really great anon! Please continue!

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Re: [America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [1b/?] anonymous May 3 2010, 02:49:33 UTC
Oooooo, I loved the reqeust, and now that it's being filled? YES.

This is off to a great start and I look forward to the updates!

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[America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [2a/?] anonymous May 3 2010, 20:46:41 UTC
Kiku sat in the lunchroom, prodding his food listlessly, his head nodding up and down. He barely got any sleep last night. Yao was annoyed by the noise he was making, shuffling papers here and there that he told the other to go to the library to finished whatever he had to do. Kiku was upset at that, but he couldn't blame Yao who had put up with it until 1 AM in the morning. He was lucky that the library was opened for students 24/7 ( ... )

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[America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [2b/?] anonymous May 3 2010, 20:47:48 UTC
Only a long while later did Kiku stop crying ( ... )

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Re: [America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [2b/?] anonymous May 4 2010, 05:00:36 UTC
D'aaawwwwww, go Kiku! I love how Alfred's so invested in the story of the manga now. Just wait til he realizes what it's based on. XD

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OP anonymous May 5 2010, 08:28:29 UTC
D'aaww Kiku..

Man, Kiku is so lucky, Alfred is the type of best friend I would easily like!

It was so sweet to how they met~
Just... Mmpf! X3

Anon, I want more of that please~

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[America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [3a/?] anonymous May 8 2010, 03:57:58 UTC
"Wow! This guy's like..." Alfred paused midsentence to think of a word. He was only 10 minutes into the chapter and was probably around the part when 'John' was trying to cheer 'Sakura' up. "...Awesome ( ... )

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[America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [3b/?] anonymous May 8 2010, 04:01:50 UTC
In his seat, Kiku froze and he started freaking out on the inside. On the outside, he appeared fine, just as he always was. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. I shouldn't have made it too obvious. Was it too obvious? I didn't think it was that obvious... My editor didn't say anything. Oh no. Oh no. Oh no. If he figures this out, this'll be so embarrassing! Alfred will probably find me strange for doing something like this and stop being friends with me!

"Oh yea, I think I know now!"

Kiku nearly fainted right there in his seat.

"That new drama that came out!"

...What?

"There was a scene kind of like this! A guy cheered up a girl by taking her out on a date!" Alfred said enthusiastically.

Kiku's fear quickly melted into anger. Was he calling his stuff unoriginal?

"Why are you glaring at me like that, Kiku?"

"No reason." He answered coldly. Stupid, oblivious idiot. Kiku thought as Alfred stared at him dumbly. "Here, I'm done with everything." He said as he passed the notebook back to the American. He packed up all of his stuff and started ( ... )

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Re: [America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [3b/?] anonymous May 9 2010, 03:11:02 UTC
Oh shnaps! I like this! :D It makes me giggle at how cute Kiku is being.

WHAT DOES GILBERT WANT? A FIGHT BY THE FLAG POLE? WHAT?! D:

:D cant wait for the next one

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Re: [America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [3b/?] anonymous May 11 2010, 01:04:58 UTC
DANCE OFF! The most awesome dancer wins the tile of "Most Awesome"! :DDD

C'mon that's totally it. Right? Right? Totally.

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OP anonymous May 11 2010, 11:27:16 UTC
Oh Al and his oblivious-ness~ XDD
Its seriously cute XD

But I can understand Kiku for being mad at Alfred to what he just said about the scene although it wasn't on purpose err... he didn't know either way

But-but Kiku you should be glad your secret is safe... for now >;3

I'm curious, what is Gilbert planning to do.

ReCaptcha: assume Carolina
What the--? A state is going to be involve Captcha? XD

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[America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [4a/?] anonymous May 12 2010, 22:25:13 UTC
Kiku didn't understand why Gilbert would want to see the two of them. Or either of them for that case. He was lost in thoughts of situations as he followed Alfred out of the school ( ... )

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[America/Japan] A Comic is Worth More Words than Pictures [4b/?] anonymous May 12 2010, 22:27:23 UTC
Kiku couldn't remain silent this time. "What?!"

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The elevator opened with a 'ding' at their floor. "Kiku~!" Alfred whined. "Don't be mad!"

"No, I'm absolutely not mad at all at the fact that you're willing to trade our friendship over a couple of burgers."

"...You're not?"

"No, of course not. I'm furious." Kiku said as he stepped into his room and slammed the door. I am never speaking to him again! He thought to himself as he took off his jacket.

"Kiku... I'm sorry." Alfred said through the door. "I only made the bet because I thought I would win..."

I will not open the door. I will not speak to him.

"Please forgive me?"

Alfred heard the lock unclick from the inside and beamed with a smile when Kiku opened the door a crack.

...Stupid, oblivious fool... Kiku thought. He didn't like going back on his word, but he couldn't stay mad at Alfred. The tone of voice he used really made him feel guilty too. "I forgive you." Kiku stated ( ... )

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