Loose Ends / Part 16 of 21
anonymous
May 11 2010, 05:42:24 UTC
America shook his head, staring up at the ceiling. “France. Stop. To him, I am only his little brother, and his colony. That’s all I am.” He lifted his chin, trying to be confident. “I’ll make him see me as an independent nation-even if that means we’ll be enemies. I’ll be his equal. No, I’ll be better than him
( ... )
Loose Ends / Part 17 of 21
anonymous
May 11 2010, 05:43:09 UTC
“Harder, you French frog,” America snapped out, wondering if that was how England would say it, if he were in this situation. Don’t look at me like that, England, if you would and probably do things like this for your own benefit.
France pounded into him harder. His body burned and he cried out. France’s hands left his hips, pressing against his stomach to push him closer, while the other lifted to cup his chin, tipping America’s face back.
Eyes hooded, America flickered his gaze over to France, who was smiling at him coyly. The way he smiled, for a brief moment, it almost looked like an expression England might have-but quickly it was gone, and it was France pounding into him. America wet his dry lips, felt the fingers brushing over his adam’s apple. “I’m so disappointed in you, my lad,” England would tell him as he moved against France, thrusting back to meet France’s upwards thrusts, crying out in pleasure as he clenched his eyes shut and stared at England, angry green eyes, face pale. “How could you do this to me?”
( ... )
Loose Ends / Part 18 of 21
anonymous
May 11 2010, 05:43:48 UTC
“Only I’m allowed to touch you-no one can be near you. You think you’re so clever, doing something so rebellious as this? You foolish boy, you foolish, foolish boy-”
“Mmm,” America gasped out, the fingers on his throat stroking, gripping his chin and tilting his head back again.
“Perhaps if I’ve given you more discipline when you were younger... you doing as you pleased couldn’t have done any good for you. I should have struck you-”
“Harder!” America cried out. France obeyed.
“Are you content to act so rashly, America? How dare you let him touch you like that, begging for-”
“More,” America gasped. France obeyed.
“You can’t possibly have wanted this-”
“Yes,” America gasped into the pillow. I do. France pounded into him, their bodies only loud slaps in the afternoon. America opened his eyes, refused to listen to this hypothetical England again-but it was just as well, as he was silent now
( ... )
Loose Ends / Part 19 of 21
anonymous
May 11 2010, 05:44:30 UTC
France stilled inside him and America felt the warmth return as France spilled his seed inside of him, but it was a small victory. He didn’t move, slumped slightly. Then, slowly, France pulled out of him and his lands left America. America collapsed onto his stomach immediately afterwards, refusing to lift his face-bright red with shame-from the pillow
( ... )
Loose Ends / Part 21 of 21
anonymous
May 11 2010, 05:47:00 UTC
“Then…” France began, stroking the hair from America’s face. “I’ll help you.”
America closed his eyes, focusing on the way the hand against him felt distinctly different from anyone else he’d ever known-France’s hands, only. He pulled the older nation close, tangled his fingers in the hair, soft, silkier than any hair he’d ever known. He focused on the smell of France’s sheets, the smell of the flowers in his hair-
He closed his eyes and kissed France. France.
He focused on everything that wasn’t what he wanted.
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P-phew. *goes to hide in a corner now* I hope that everyone likes it. OP, I'm sorry that it ended up focusing so strongly on the USUK vibe instead of FRUK or even France/America... since it was written from America's POV, it was hard to put in more of France.
I hope you lovely anons out there like this alsdhgad; *ducks away from flying tomatoes*
Re: Loose Ends / Part 21 of 21
anonymous
May 11 2010, 06:09:16 UTC
Wow, you're really fast at writing, and writing well, to boot. This was, I don't know, just so sad and painful yet also hot, all rolled up into one big pile of emotions.
I'm sure OP will love this, don't you worry, writer!anon~!
Re: Loose Ends / Part 21 of 21
anonymous
May 11 2010, 06:17:39 UTC
Wow that was fast. And so hot too. Oh poor boys, both of them so in love with England (or at least want him very much.) I think this is the first ever fic that acknowledges France and America's mutual wanting of England in one way or the other.
(Don't worry boys, years later you'll have your threesome /shot)
...Also I can't help bit wonder, who IS Iggy sleeping with all this time then? His long-time ally Portugal?
ANON. Let me have your babies, because seriously. Not only did you write this quickly, you wrote it so well and it was so hot and so emotional and g-guh when America was envisioning what England would say to him... fffff. Oh England, you hot cockblock, you. I loved him in this fill and he wasn't even technically there.
Anon has no specifications other than that - the two can know it, one can learn by the end, England can walk in, etc etc. Go wild, anons. ♥
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France pounded into him harder. His body burned and he cried out. France’s hands left his hips, pressing against his stomach to push him closer, while the other lifted to cup his chin, tipping America’s face back.
Eyes hooded, America flickered his gaze over to France, who was smiling at him coyly. The way he smiled, for a brief moment, it almost looked like an expression England might have-but quickly it was gone, and it was France pounding into him. America wet his dry lips, felt the fingers brushing over his adam’s apple. “I’m so disappointed in you, my lad,” England would tell him as he moved against France, thrusting back to meet France’s upwards thrusts, crying out in pleasure as he clenched his eyes shut and stared at England, angry green eyes, face pale. “How could you do this to me?” ( ... )
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“Mmm,” America gasped out, the fingers on his throat stroking, gripping his chin and tilting his head back again.
“Perhaps if I’ve given you more discipline when you were younger... you doing as you pleased couldn’t have done any good for you. I should have struck you-”
“Harder!” America cried out. France obeyed.
“Are you content to act so rashly, America? How dare you let him touch you like that, begging for-”
“More,” America gasped. France obeyed.
“You can’t possibly have wanted this-”
“Yes,” America gasped into the pillow. I do. France pounded into him, their bodies only loud slaps in the afternoon. America opened his eyes, refused to listen to this hypothetical England again-but it was just as well, as he was silent now ( ... )
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America closed his eyes, focusing on the way the hand against him felt distinctly different from anyone else he’d ever known-France’s hands, only. He pulled the older nation close, tangled his fingers in the hair, soft, silkier than any hair he’d ever known. He focused on the smell of France’s sheets, the smell of the flowers in his hair-
He closed his eyes and kissed France. France.
He focused on everything that wasn’t what he wanted.
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P-phew. *goes to hide in a corner now*
I hope that everyone likes it. OP, I'm sorry that it ended up focusing so strongly on the USUK vibe instead of FRUK or even France/America... since it was written from America's POV, it was hard to put in more of France.
I hope you lovely anons out there like this alsdhgad; *ducks away from flying tomatoes*
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I'm sure OP will love this, don't you worry, writer!anon~!
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(Don't worry boys, years later you'll have your threesome /shot)
...Also I can't help bit wonder, who IS Iggy sleeping with all this time then? His long-time ally Portugal?
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ANON. Let me have your babies, because seriously. Not only did you write this quickly, you wrote it so well and it was so hot and so emotional and g-guh when America was envisioning what England would say to him... fffff. Oh England, you hot cockblock, you. I loved him in this fill and he wasn't even technically there.
Thank yoooou so much, anon.
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YOU ARE AMAZING, ANON.
How do you complete all this in less than a day?????????
You're brilliant.
(showers you with cookies and internets) Consider these a bribe for a sequel, yes? ;D
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