At World's End -- Part 2a
anonymous
January 31 2010, 01:25:47 UTC
His father looked much the same as he had five years earlier, perhaps a few more creases but he certainly didn't look like he'd lost much sleep over his son's disappearance. Nor over the fact that he was preparing to sign his other son away like he was a piece of property. "There will be no contract signing today, Arthur," he said darkly using his father's name as a weapon
( ... )
Re: At World's End -- Part 2g
anonymous
February 1 2010, 20:31:21 UTC
Is that possessive!Ivan I see rearing his awesome head? Hello, possessive!Ivan.
I'm in love with this fill so far-- the tone of it, the description and the character set-up. I actually got a little giddy seeing that the second part had been posted XD XD
As for the events so far, it seems like Ivan was aware of more than Alfred's exploits... and he fully intended to be leaving with Alfred and not Matthew. I could be wrong though >->
Re: At World's End -- Part 2g
anonymous
February 5 2010, 04:59:24 UTC
I absolutely love this and I love your writing! While reading I thought "Ah, why is a writing like this wasting time writing fanfic... ah, no, if this anon weren't wasting time writing this then I wouldn't get to read it...!" Really, your writing is excellent and I love the tension in the room. ♥ Silly Alfred, letting himself be cornered they way he did, but he totally would go crashing into the situation like that. I'm looking forward to the next bit and especially Ivan and Alfred's post-planning talk. ♥
Reply
I'm in love with this fill so far-- the tone of it, the description and the character set-up. I actually got a little giddy seeing that the second part had been posted XD XD
As for the events so far, it seems like Ivan was aware of more than Alfred's exploits... and he fully intended to be leaving with Alfred and not Matthew. I could be wrong though >->
Update soon! <33
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment