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Whose Clueless Now? USxUK anonymous December 24 2009, 00:37:37 UTC
Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 4b anonymous December 24 2009, 08:58:18 UTC
“So defeatist,” Francis observed. “Whatever happened to ‘oui we can ( ... )

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK anonymous December 24 2009, 08:59:31 UTC
Francis practically shoved Alfred through the doors of the meeting room minutes before the meeting began. Alfred tried not to fidget as the other nations began to stare, and he sat down at his seat with little ceremony, hoping for once that maybe his gray suit would work like camouflage and blend him in seamlessly with the gray walls behind him ( ... )

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 4c anonymous December 24 2009, 09:00:44 UTC
this part above is 4c, btw.

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 4c anonymous December 24 2009, 10:20:15 UTC
Francis is making Arthur jealous lol

Oh, that wine bastard XD

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 4c anonymous December 24 2009, 13:21:43 UTC
Oh France, you dastardly bastard you...I do so love it when France is more than a sex-crazed perv and is instead a scheming bastard who is more in love with love than sex.

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK anonymous December 24 2009, 12:48:38 UTC
This, anon, is a good fill.

And I LOVE this Francis-plots-to-make-Arthur-Jealous thing. I can't say I've seen it before. Then again, it's not like I read a ton of USUK fics, so maybe I'm just out of the loop. Either way, good job!

my one critique is that you're a little heavy on the random french for my tastes, but it's a small critique.

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK anonymous December 25 2009, 06:12:15 UTC
FANTASTIC. Francis, you rule ♥

Nothing like dressing up someone else's love interest in nice clothes...nice clothes taken from a longtime rival's CLOSET. From a hotel. While in a conference.

Oh, France. If this doesn't work, nothing will.

Keep it up, author of awesomeness. I am very much keeping my eye on this!

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 5a anonymous December 25 2009, 22:52:44 UTC
Alfred was positively miserable by the time the meeting adjourned. Arthur hadn’t looked at him the entire time, not even to glance, before the man was walking out the door with Matthew at his side. Alfred’s eyes followed Arthur out of the room forlornly, before a hand came down on his shoulder ( ... )

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 5b anonymous December 25 2009, 22:54:44 UTC
Alfred looked around and realized they were sitting at one of the few tables in an alcove, surrounded by windows that looked out on the street. He was appreciating the view before he turned his head and stiffened ( ... )

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 5c anonymous December 25 2009, 22:55:35 UTC
“Good. Garcon!” Francis called to a passing waiter, who stopped at their table almost immediately. “Bring us a bottle of your most expensive wine ( ... )

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 5c anonymous December 26 2009, 06:25:57 UTC
Oh, Francis
you, you are really a bastard
what if Arthur does not trust Alfred when he confesses?

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 5c anonymous December 28 2009, 04:59:28 UTC
I am in love, anon. America's feelings are so perfectly anguished. It makes me miss having crushes.
And France's slyness is too perfect. Poor Arthur!

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 6a anonymous December 29 2009, 07:15:09 UTC
When Alfred woke up the next morning to the ring of his alarm clock he felt like absolute crap. His head was pounding, his eyes stung the moment the light hit his retinas, and his mouth was dry and tasted like something had crawled in and died there ( ... )

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 6b anonymous December 29 2009, 07:16:44 UTC
Alfred placed one hand against the wall for balance and just stood there, certain things from the previous conversation clicking together within his mind. It wasn’t long before the thoughts finished coming together and he was left scowling into empty space ( ... )

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Re: Whose Clueless Now? USxUK part 6c anonymous December 29 2009, 07:17:26 UTC
Alfred simply stared at him, his hands almost comically suspended beside his head as he took in Francis’s words. “What do you mean ( ... )

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