Invisible Hand (2a/?)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 04:15:42 UTC
America slammed into the first stall of the first bathroom he could find and dropped his things, hands scrabbling to remove his shirt. He yanked his tie so hard he nearly choked, but America barely paused to think about it. Within seconds he was naked from the waist up, hoping the loss of clothes would make it easier to prove to himself that /nothing was touching him/. It was all in his head. But even as he watched his own body, searching for signs of anything that might be causing this, he felt those same unexplainable touches trailing from the first patches of golden hair above his pants down under the waistband of his boxers
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Re: Invisible Hand (2b/?)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 04:19:20 UTC
America’s eyes narrowed slightly. He knew? Oh, crap, that probably meant this was England’s fault. America suddenly regretted doubting England’s babble about magic and fairy folk. But this was just /not fair/! You didn’t torment someone like this! And now that the phantom touches had stopped America was beginning to reach that point where he needed release now or someone was going to get hurt. This was beyond cruel
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Re: Invisible Hand (2b/?)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 04:33:43 UTC
holy crap.
Gawd damn, anon! Your imagination-as-written is doing wonderful things to my brain right nao. @__@ Gyyuuuh, just. Nnnng. <3
This anon will be happy with whatever you write, as your England is super sexy and full of devious win, yussss he is. :]
ReCaptcha: conjured office. Well, no, Captcha, I believe those fairies first showed up in a meeting room, and then found themselves in a bathroom stall...but you were pretty close.
Re: Invisible Hand (2b/?)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 04:41:32 UTC
This is actually kind of hot anyway, but I'll send you those guts through the Internet. ;D There's plenty of inspiration around here, if you do decide to write the smut, but yeah, we still love you even if you don't.
Oh god, I am enjoying this fill, though; just the thought of England deciding that this was the best way to prove he's not crazy is just AWESOME. XD
Just behind his previous expression (oh, Jesus, that was lust, wasn’t it?), America could see England was well and truly pissed. I love this sentence, but I'm especially amused by America's brilliant deduction in the middle. Then again, it's to be at your best when so thoroughly distracted. XD
Oh woooooow. I was SO stoked when I saw someone had fulfilled my request - but the part was maxed out and I couldn't reply. (what a lovely way to max, btw) Authoranon, this part was even better. I love the way you describe Alfred getting more and more hot and bothered as the time goes by, and then when England, mm lovely shades of pirate!England coming by - is totally entrancing him (love that word) ...oh man. Will wait with bated breath for the next update!
OP is also kind of nervous about writing smut, so authoranon, please don't feel pressured to if you don't want to. But I will say what you've written already is (in my head) sexier than many things on the kinkmeme. :D
Re: Invisible Hand (3/?)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 23:34:47 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely responses! Anon was ecstatic at seeing them! And thus, you get yet another update and probably the next within twenty-four hours. Also thank you for giving me the guts to write risqué stuff. Sex is officially happening later on
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Re: Invisible Hand (3/?)
anonymous
March 9 2010, 00:25:58 UTC
You're baaaaaaaaaaaaack! Already. :DDD
I'm glad you decided to give the smut a try, because I can already tell it's going to be hot. And I adore that you're throwing in characterization in even with the foreplay; too many people get distracted and forget that important detail, which is sad because it actually enhances things! ;D
I especially loved this: That lust was still there, along with the tiniest spark of anger, but mostly England looked kind of earnest and a little desperate. Because observant!America is a favorite of mine, even if he's only observant with the proper motivation. XD
That last line is a good one, too, and that was probably the best place to break it off without teasing us too~ badly~.
Re: Invisible Hand (3/?)
anonymous
March 9 2010, 00:43:55 UTC
THE UST FORCE IS STRONG IN THIS ONE.
Oh man, anon, I can not begin to tell you how pleased I am that you've updated so soon; best of all, as the anon above me noted, you've kept both Iggy and Al true to themselves even in the midst of all this hot hot makin' out! @__@ I envy your skills and squirm with delight at the frequency of your updates~! (Have you, by chance, written anything else for the meme? Or did you say so already and I missed it?)
recaptcha: to santos! ...uh, okay, captcha. Whatever makes you happy.
Re: Invisible Hand (3/?)
anonymous
March 9 2010, 00:53:07 UTC
O-oh geeze...you guys flatter me! Characterization is a major thing for this anon, so it's really great to hear I did them justice. *embarrassed/pleased beyond all recognition* Hopefully I'll live up to expectations for the rest of this!
And I've done one other fill: America vs the Westboro Baptist Church. Please note the current fill is far superior to my first!
Re: Invisible Hand (4c/4 Last Part!)
anonymous
March 9 2010, 23:51:33 UTC
“I suppose that’s true,” he mumbled, watching his own hands fiddle with the hem of America’s still half-open pants and eventually buttoning them back up for him. “And of course you would choose now to actually pay attention to me…” England rolled his eyes, but grinned crookedly at the American. “You are staying in London for the night, correct
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Gawd damn, anon! Your imagination-as-written is doing wonderful things to my brain right nao. @__@ Gyyuuuh, just. Nnnng. <3
This anon will be happy with whatever you write, as your England is super sexy and full of devious win, yussss he is. :]
ReCaptcha: conjured office. Well, no, Captcha, I believe those fairies first showed up in a meeting room, and then found themselves in a bathroom stall...but you were pretty close.
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Oh god, I am enjoying this fill, though; just the thought of England deciding that this was the best way to prove he's not crazy is just AWESOME. XD
Just behind his previous expression (oh, Jesus, that was lust, wasn’t it?), America could see England was well and truly pissed. I love this sentence, but I'm especially amused by America's brilliant deduction in the middle. Then again, it's to be at your best when so thoroughly distracted. XD
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“Holy crap! There’s…you sent fairies into my pants?!”
... brb laughing my ass off.
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OP is also kind of nervous about writing smut, so authoranon, please don't feel pressured to if you don't want to. But I will say what you've written already is (in my head) sexier than many things on the kinkmeme. :D
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And anon has been super encouraged by responses, so may in fact be writing not one, but two semi- or full-out smut scenes. *blushes head off*
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I'm glad you decided to give the smut a try, because I can already tell it's going to be hot. And I adore that you're throwing in characterization in even with the foreplay; too many people get distracted and forget that important detail, which is sad because it actually enhances things! ;D
I especially loved this: That lust was still there, along with the tiniest spark of anger, but mostly England looked kind of earnest and a little desperate. Because observant!America is a favorite of mine, even if he's only observant with the proper motivation. XD
That last line is a good one, too, and that was probably the best place to break it off without teasing us too~ badly~.
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Oh man, anon, I can not begin to tell you how pleased I am that you've updated so soon; best of all, as the anon above me noted, you've kept both Iggy and Al true to themselves even in the midst of all this hot hot makin' out! @__@ I envy your skills and squirm with delight at the frequency of your updates~! (Have you, by chance, written anything else for the meme? Or did you say so already and I missed it?)
recaptcha: to santos! ...uh, okay, captcha. Whatever makes you happy.
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And I've done one other fill: America vs the Westboro Baptist Church. Please note the current fill is far superior to my first!
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