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Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 1a/8) anonymous February 28 2010, 23:58:24 UTC
Original request:
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=15934498

Request asked for Lithuania and fem-Poland, dealing with pregnancy, in any form. This is possibly the most depressing response imaginable.

Psuedocyesis

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"Pan Rzeczpospolita?"

Lithuania looks up. Adam is watching him with an expression of faint concern. He quite likes Adam - Adam Kazimierz Czartoryski, a thoughtful man with good taste, who he hopes will make a good king. Someday. As soon as Augustus gets around to dying, as he really should hurry up and do, and is that a treacherous thought? Probably. He doesn't much care right now, though. "Hello," he mumbles, and tries not to look as tired as he feels. It's mid-afternoon, and the library is bathed in light. "Is something the matter?"

"I had no special cause to seek you out, if that's what you mean. I was suprised to see you here." An uncomfortable pause. "You don't look well."

He means You look even less ( ... )

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 1a/8) anonymous March 1 2010, 00:01:59 UTC
The book is in French, Lithuania notes, as he opens it up and squints at it. Adam is always giving him books. Sometimes he enjoys them, sometimes he want to throw them across the room, but they all make him think, which he thinks is the point. "An understandable conclusion, from the mess we've made of civilization," he says ( ... )

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Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 2/8) anonymous March 1 2010, 00:03:05 UTC
It's long past dark when Lithuania returns home - almost past midnight. The roads are muddy with the misty rain, and he leaves his shoes in the kitchen. All is dark and silent. Belarus will have put Courland to bed long since, and she tends to retire early herself. Poland sits up recklessly late with her books, but her window was unlit as he approached ( ... )

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 2/8) anonymous March 1 2010, 02:55:47 UTC
Anon, this is beautiful and I love the direction you've taken it. The characterizations are great, and the atmosphere of creeping unhappiness is really nicely done.

Happily awaiting part three :)

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 2/8) anonymous March 2 2010, 05:41:58 UTC
Wow, this is really amazing. I don't usually even read gender switch fics, but I'm loving this. Awesome job, anxiously awaiting the next part!

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 2/8) anonymous March 3 2010, 07:21:58 UTC
This is great, anon! And dear god, so heartbreaking... I hope you continue!

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Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 3a/8) anonymous March 6 2010, 20:57:54 UTC

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In the thin morning light Poland looks young. She's managed to steal the blankets, of course, but instead of being sprawled out and wrapped in them she hugs the thick bundle close to her chest. Lithuania touches her swollen breast, and she gasps and kicks in her sleep, catching him squarely on the shin. Of course. She's always been like this. He tosses his remaining covers back and slips out; the chill wavers close to his bones and makes his bare feet twitch, and Lithuania wonders whether he should light a fire, but no - he'll be gone soon enough, and Poland's more sensitive to heat than cold, especially right now. Besides, she has all the blankets. She's been stealing blankets since their very first night together.

She was young then, in the way of their kind, hundreds of years young. She looked barely older than her king, and they wore the same cut of dress, Lithuania remembers that. Poland took his hands in her own and smiled, and if her hands were trembling, he made no remark on the matter, any more than she spoke of the ( ... )

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Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 3b/8) anonymous March 6 2010, 21:01:40 UTC
nge it ( ... )

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 3b/8) anonymous March 7 2010, 04:49:20 UTC
Yay! An update!

Lithuania was tall enough to tuck her head under his chin while he was still buried inside her *BLUSH* You know, Liet, I'm kinda short too... and I really really like you... *BLUSH*

Ha. I almost forgot that everyone including her thought Hungary was a boy. Good job remembering the time period. And also for remembering that even if Jadwiga was a girl, she was still a king.

Keep up the good work! My goodness, I love these two to bits. ^__^

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 3b/8) anonymous March 7 2010, 18:51:51 UTC
It's a great idea, anon. I hope you didn't drop this request, because the idea is amazing and the atmosphere is well achieved.

"Lithuania was tall enough to tuck her head under his chin while he was still buried inside her" sexy words are sexy.

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 3b/8) anonymous March 9 2010, 03:34:52 UTC
I love the intriguing complexity woven into the story the most, of tenderness and bitterness and joy and despair. Lithuania's voice strikes a very tragic chord and I don't think I've ever seen him so very- human. He's tired and cynical but so very loving, already worn down by the world. And yet, the love he has for Poland is so very bittersweet and conflicted, with resentment and affection constantly clashing. I have to say that this is the most brilliant characterization of him I've ever found and I adore it.

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Re: Psuedocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 3b/8) anonymous March 11 2010, 11:49:58 UTC
Finding honest to god serious Poland/Lithuania that isn't just about wangst and h/c is a rare thing these days, and you are writing it wonderfully. Thank you.

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Pseudocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 4a/8) anonymous March 13 2010, 19:49:41 UTC
[And I just now notice I typoed the title, arrgh. 'the ferris', captcha? Well, Liet could probably use a day off, I grant ... Thanks to all the commentors; the next bit should be a little faster.]Belarus and Courland are already eating breakfast, hot oatmeal with sugar. The kitchen feels empty with only three people in it. Lithuania ladles himself a bowlful and sits down between them, ruffling Courland's hair. "Good morning ( ... )

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Pseudocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 4b/8) anonymous March 13 2010, 19:50:23 UTC
Lithuania clenches his fists and is glad he left his sabre in his bedroom. The silence stretches between them, dark and inviting, begging for the words that would turn their perpetual ceasefire to blows. But it's Courland who fills it, voice cracking. "P-please don't fight," he says, and stares at the dregs of his oatmeal instead of at them. "Please. Wuh - we have enough to worry about. Russia l-likes it when we fight ( ... )

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Re: Pseudocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 4b/8) anonymous March 14 2010, 23:46:17 UTC
This is one of the most interesting APH fanfictions that I've ever read!
and I really want to hug Courland/Latvia ;__;

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Re: Pseudocyesis (Lithuania/Poland, part 4b/8) anonymous March 15 2010, 01:06:45 UTC
Awww, I feel so bad for Liet-chan. The commonwealth is in decline and there are so many internal problems... He loves Poland, but can't stop himself from thinking treacherous thoughts.

I loved when you wrote that Brandenberg was like a prince taking the heroine away because the genders are switched. Just like Hetalia to smash gender stereotypes. ^__^

I'm starting to fear for Poland...

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