Chopin explains it better than I do [1/5]
anonymous
January 7 2010, 00:15:07 UTC
had to write this one after talking with the OP for the Prussia/Austria/Italy request that I filled a couple of days ago, I got inspiration. Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=22293200#t22293200 “Austria/N. Italy, Prompt is music. Kink is Italy comforting Austria because Austria feels guilty for mistreating Italy when he was younger, but Italy's okay now. Happy ending necessary. Other than that, do what you want.”
This is what came out. Short, nothing really happens, but I hope OP likes…“What do you mean, you can’t make it
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Chopin explains it better than I do [2/5]
anonymous
January 7 2010, 00:18:28 UTC
“Italy” he attempted to be polite, but the sight of an indecent-looking Italy right in front of him triggered his chords like his fingers did to a piano. “I see you’re as undressed as usual
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Chopin explains it better than I do [3/5]
anonymous
January 7 2010, 00:19:30 UTC
That was why France and England had so much spite to throw at each other -they were equals, always switching from a winner to the other.
Playing around, knowing it all was transitory.
Italy had never been on the winning end, and didn’t deserve the anger and strictness he’d been receiving for all the years before he fought with some wandering inner strength to be free.
That was why Austria didn’t like being around Italy alone. That was why he tried so much to send him away, make him stop smiling -because if other nations might not care, Austria still thought at back then, and felt guilty
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Chopin explains it better than I do [4/5]
anonymous
January 7 2010, 00:20:29 UTC
One of Austria’s hands, against his will, moved upwards, ruffling Italy’s hair. Italy looked at him, surprised at the gesture, but his lips soon twitched into a beam. “Let’s go~ let’s go~ I can’t wait now! I’m going to Chopin’s concert
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Chopin explains it better than I do [5/5]
anonymous
January 7 2010, 00:22:55 UTC
It was ‘sorry’ over and over, and it was ‘I didn’t mean to hurt you. I didn’t mean to restrain you’ and then it was also ‘I cared about you. You were not just a territory to me’, and then it was ‘sorry’ again, and then ‘I still care about you, I’m glad we can share Chopin’.
And Italy never looked away, brown eyes understanding, and it was not simply being forgiving, and Austria could understand it now -how Italy took every word of his, every painful admission, and accepted that Austria felt guilty, and then nodded because it was okBecause Italy, despite everything, had his own way to deal with things, and even if he wasn’t good at war, and he acted stupidly, he was still a nation that had lived for hundreds of years, feeling pain, but also growing up
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OP is absolutely touched
anonymous
January 7 2010, 16:31:54 UTC
This story made me so happy, I could almost cry. They're both so in-character and they just...understand each other. It's a warmth beyond words. Thank you so, so so so much for writing this.
OP of the Other Fill...
anonymous
January 7 2010, 19:48:07 UTC
Oh gods this was just gorgeous...I love how you wrote the both of them and how Austria felt like Austria even at the end and the use of the music and your Italy...gods he's gorgeous. Yeah...this was fabulous from start to finish!
There needs to be so much more of these two written...why isn't there more of these two written? *sighs*
This bits that centered around the No Touching rule especially killed me because Italy is such a tactile person I think that would have been the absolute worst part of the experience of living in Austria's house. The strict rules and the chores and the bad food might have been things he didn't like but not being able to expression himself in that most basic way must have felt very stifling to him I think.
The more I think about it the more I wonder again why there is not more fic with these two. There's so much goodness to explore both with Italy and with Austria.
i usually de-anon to post these things. you can find the pruitaau on fanfiction.net, so if you have an account, i'd like to friend you. or on LJ. i like how you think :D
well, i added the part about touching exactly because of that -italy is a touchy-feeling person, so austria's way of controlling him by making him stay put would only be worse than making him do chores and probably even more hurting than prohibiting him to eat pasta.
i need to write either a pr0n where italy gets a blindfold to make him feel more, or a more serious fic where somehow he's forced not to hug/touch people and work it from there.
AuIta is enticing (so are SwitzIta, PruIta and AmeIta, and I wrote one for each), but it's so hard to make those two work. austria is stuck-up, so to keep him in chara with italy... but i love those two [and himaruya apparently does too, he tried the 'rosey' comic with austria and italy instead of any other more 'canon' pairing...]. there needs to be more, but not many are fans of
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Re: 3dash-anon
anonymous
January 8 2010, 00:08:38 UTC
The thing is I can see Austria not realizing how truly hurtful restricting Italy from doing the touchy-feely is. He's not a touchy feely guy himself so he just doesn't realize how that's about as vital to Italy as breathing is. I think he's very repressed because he spent most of his formative younger years with Switzerland (who's...well Switzerland) and Prussia (who's well...Prussia) in fact his anti-anything-to-do-with-touchy feely might very well be as a result of dealing with Prussia. To him touch might very well equal hurt in his mind or at least not-good-things. So he might have been trying to A. Protect himself or B. Protect Italy because he could think that Italy might end up getting hurt by being so open and out there. Or something...I did have an actual point to this ramble but I lost it about half way through...oh well
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3dash-anon again :D
anonymous
January 8 2010, 00:31:14 UTC
by any means, DO contact me. anywhere will be ok. o.o what is the fill you talk about?I'm more of a dark-fic writer. I could actually see better this plot of yours than what i ever had in mind... germany not in touch with his leader at the WWII time is something i'm already using for a gerita fic i'm working on, though it's been a while i've written a chapter for it (i'm also going to have italy attempt to give up on his being 'italy the nation' and mussolini calling him 'republic of salò' instead, since it's historical... and i need to work more on the angst
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Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=22293200#t22293200
“Austria/N. Italy, Prompt is music. Kink is Italy comforting Austria because Austria feels guilty for mistreating Italy when he was younger, but Italy's okay now. Happy ending necessary. Other than that, do what you want.”
This is what came out. Short, nothing really happens, but I hope OP likes…“What do you mean, you can’t make it ( ... )
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Playing around, knowing it all was transitory.
Italy had never been on the winning end, and didn’t deserve the anger and strictness he’d been receiving for all the years before he fought with some wandering inner strength to be free.
That was why Austria didn’t like being around Italy alone. That was why he tried so much to send him away, make him stop smiling -because if other nations might not care, Austria still thought at back then, and felt guilty ( ... )
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And Italy never looked away, brown eyes understanding, and it was not simply being forgiving, and Austria could understand it now -how Italy took every word of his, every painful admission, and accepted that Austria felt guilty, and then nodded because it was okBecause Italy, despite everything, had his own way to deal with things, and even if he wasn’t good at war, and he acted stupidly, he was still a nation that had lived for hundreds of years, feeling pain, but also growing up ( ... )
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There needs to be so much more of these two written...why isn't there more of these two written? *sighs*
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The more I think about it the more I wonder again why there is not more fic with these two. There's so much goodness to explore both with Italy and with Austria.
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i usually de-anon to post these things. you can find the pruitaau on fanfiction.net, so if you have an account, i'd like to friend you. or on LJ. i like how you think :D
well, i added the part about touching exactly because of that -italy is a touchy-feeling person, so austria's way of controlling him by making him stay put would only be worse than making him do chores and probably even more hurting than prohibiting him to eat pasta.
i need to write either a pr0n where italy gets a blindfold to make him feel more, or a more serious fic where somehow he's forced not to hug/touch people and work it from there.
AuIta is enticing (so are SwitzIta, PruIta and AmeIta, and I wrote one for each), but it's so hard to make those two work. austria is stuck-up, so to keep him in chara with italy... but i love those two [and himaruya apparently does too, he tried the 'rosey' comic with austria and italy instead of any other more 'canon' pairing...]. there needs to be more, but not many are fans of ( ... )
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