Why Toris disliked the royal palace [2/?]
anonymous
December 30 2009, 23:06:36 UTC
The pole's shield laid on the ground, knocked off the polish warrior's arm by a rough kick only a few seconds ago. His sword lay underneath the Prussian knight metal-guarded foot, neutralized. Bright green orbs looked up in pride and mock into the knight's red eyes, contradicting the poor state of their owner
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Re: Why Toris disliked the royal palace [3/?]
anonymous
December 30 2009, 23:09:53 UTC
He was now clean and all his wounds were dressed well. Most of them were dry hits, and the few cuts he has were minor. He looked out the window to the gardens below, swimming in red twilight, and examined his shield one more time, still wondering
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Why Toris disliked the royal palace [4/?]
anonymous
December 30 2009, 23:13:43 UTC
If there were one advantage to their brief staying at the palace from time to time, it was the thick walls and doors of the rooms. No one would be able to hear a thing, even as Feliks moaned and pressed himself to him, surprised yet pleased
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Re: Why Toris disliked the royal palace [5/?]
anonymous
December 30 2009, 23:16:01 UTC
"That's one more reason I don’t like to be here…" he put his head over the blond's shoulder, and focused as well as he could while aroused and pressed to his lover's body, trying to removing the annoying belt out of his way, he grown
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Why Toris disliked the royal palace [6/?]
anonymous
December 30 2009, 23:23:03 UTC
"Are you, like, gonna' just look at me all night long?!" a smile made his way to his face as he heard Feliks' grunt, and felt his thin, yet strong arms pulling him down on him
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Why Toris disliked the royal palace [9/9]
anonymous
December 30 2009, 23:32:33 UTC
Feliks opened his eyes and his smile brightened up, "I was thinking about, like, the perfect solution!" he picked up the candle and walked to Toris. "We could, like, totally get married
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Re: Why Toris disliked the royal palace [9/9]
anonymous
December 31 2009, 04:37:41 UTC
Oh wow, REALLY god anon!
My only suggestion would be to find an english beta who could clean up the typos and slight grammatical errors for you. But even with the small errors it was REALLY REALLY good!!!
I love manly!Liet to death. And you describe Feliks so deliciously I want to steal him for myself :)
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My only suggestion would be to find an english beta who could clean up the typos and slight grammatical errors for you. But even with the small errors it was REALLY REALLY good!!!
I love manly!Liet to death. And you describe Feliks so deliciously I want to steal him for myself :)
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