Life Lessons [3]
anonymous
December 22 2009, 09:23:19 UTC
He leaned back down for a kiss. They let their bodies rub against one another’s. Raivis heard Peter groan when their cocks rubbed against each other. Raivis slid off Peter and began to fiddle with his belt and pant kicking them off and letting them pool on the floor; he felt the bed shift as Peter did the same
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Re: Life Lessons [3]
anonymous
December 22 2009, 17:54:04 UTC
Not OP by the way.
I always like Latvia/Sealand. They're cute together. Even if this story seemed a bit rushed, they were still cute. At least you filled it, right? I don't think they were really OOC very much. I mean, Sealand is older, so that would change things. And Latvia's older too.
One thing though. In the first part: The comment about how Sealand shouldn't be at the meeting because he's not technically part of the EU. If it's an EU meeting, then Russia shouldn't be there either. Maybe you meant a Europe meeting? Although, I'm not sure if those actually exist...
Sorry about my criticisms. I hope they're constructive! And I did like the story, so that's positive, right?
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No, no you can’t. Raivis thought. Instead of voicing his opinions he just gave that small smile and kept walking ( ... )
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I always like Latvia/Sealand. They're cute together. Even if this story seemed a bit rushed, they were still cute. At least you filled it, right? I don't think they were really OOC very much. I mean, Sealand is older, so that would change things. And Latvia's older too.
One thing though. In the first part: The comment about how Sealand shouldn't be at the meeting because he's not technically part of the EU. If it's an EU meeting, then Russia shouldn't be there either. Maybe you meant a Europe meeting? Although, I'm not sure if those actually exist...
Sorry about my criticisms. I hope they're constructive! And I did like the story, so that's positive, right?
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