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[Part 5] Book of War anonymous December 19 2009, 12:35:53 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=11958026#t11958026

OP wanted someone loving Conquistador!Spain and try to provoke him to his, ahem, "old habits." SO! I went with Russia and Spain, if that is okay? Is it? Insane!Russia/Conquistador!Spain is yummy, isn't it? D:

Er, also, there's so much to warn about, so I'll just say that if you're an avid visitor of the kink meme and not corrupted yet, then maybe it's time you be! D<
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The book that contains history of a certain kind lays nicely on his bedside table, and when the night falls, he often traces his fingers over the three letters written in bold gold on the cover, the font grand and precious like it's a thing to be worshiped. And he worships, in his own silent way. He smiles and he worships.

Weakness, it bores him. And this world he lives in right now is weak. Strong words, pressuring actions, but still so goddamn weak. (Like a once great general whose spine had ( ... )

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Book of War (2/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 12:39:40 UTC
Ivan is no stranger to torture, but Inquisition is what makes his mouth water. It makes no sense when he grows hard at the thought of Antonio's ever-present smile and piles of bodies that were dangled too deep in sin to reach salvation. With every burned soul, Antonio feels satisfaction, and with every saved spirit he kneels down like he's humble and thanks the Carpenter for making things so ( ... )

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Book of War (3/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 12:44:10 UTC
Though Antonio gives him one anyway, a bit absentminded and with words that drift, but still. “I've been lapsing into indecency.” Antonio stares at the saint that smiles back at him, gentle and not judging, but the guilt is heavy and Ivan observes as Antonio bows his head, presses the rosary to his forehead and whispers, “he was so young,” unintentionally aloud. “Oh God,” and he's more hunched on the ground now, a hand reaching the floor to help support the weight of his sin, “so young ( ... )

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Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 12:47:40 UTC
Ivan lies on the floor, even after the last echoes of Antonio's running steps fade away. He reaches a hand to brush at his neck, pleased when he thinks how bruised it was going to be. If he didn't wear a scarf tomorrow, then along with the bite marks General Winter has left on his neck, they would see the force of a past empire, and Antonio could not make himself think that this never happened. A constant reminder throughout an entire meeting.

Like the rosary on the ground, Ivan smiles to himself as he slowly gets up from the floor, Antonio would fall apart.
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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 14:17:25 UTC
AAAARGGGHHHHH! I loved this! i need to know what happens next! please please! Antonio being all inquisitional and crazy is so hot!

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 14:33:38 UTC
NEED MOAR!awesome job!

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 14:44:34 UTC
Yay Antonio, live and conquer. We love your inner-yandere.

ReCaptcha: Rock Colombus O_O

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 16:45:28 UTC
THIS. A MILLION, TRILLION, BAJILLION TIMES THIS.
BRB, GOING TO BASK IN THE SHEER AWESOME OF THIS FILL.
PLEASE CONTINUE TO ROCK MY WORLD.

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 16:57:31 UTC
I need the rest of this fic like a fish needs the water! OMG yandere!Spain! grrrrr!

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 19 2009, 20:42:23 UTC
God. This. I don't.

I didn't even realize how much I love yandere Spain until I read this. .__.

Please, por favor, continue. <333

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 20 2009, 03:56:39 UTC
oh god, i don't EVER comment on the kinkmeme but this... THISSSSSSS

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 20 2009, 07:45:23 UTC
OP has been quietly hoping and praying someone would write this- I've come very close to just starting writing some silly Prussia/Spain thing and pretending I wasn't OP just because I liked the prompt so much (I feel like an idiot saying that XD). This, though? This is better then I imagined. So well written! And I've been fascinated by Russia and Spain since I read about their interaction in WWII and Stalin's wish for an Allied invasion of Spain (which UK shot down)... ugly, fascinating history, but I don't think I've ever seen a fic with them together.

I am so happy you're writing this. Spain's current caution and Russia's crazy are playing off of each other wonderfully... I can't wait to see what happens when Russia finally gets the crazy from Spain that he seeks. :D

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous January 2 2010, 14:57:26 UTC
Author!Anon thinks that OP should write that Prussia/Spain! There can never be enough love for Conquistador!Spain, yes?

I have to confess, though, that I know little about Spain and Russia's history together. I just love both characters and wanted them to interact somehow. xD; But now that you mentioned that, maybe I should study them a bit more...

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 21 2009, 02:57:08 UTC
OHMIGAD I can't wait for more!!!
This was written so well and and and the langauge you use is so describing and beautiful! Also the way you wrote the characters were just perfect!

I wonder if I can sleep after reading this.

Anyway, I'm so going to be reading the next parts when you post them!

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Re: Book of War (3b/?) anonymous December 31 2009, 03:23:40 UTC
This was awesome. Masochist!Russia is just so disturbing, so twisted and somehow way more scary. And Spain. Oh my god, Spain. Your description of him is just beyond words.

"(...)and a smile crawls on those lips, sweet and so out of place for someone who usually represents nothing but joy."

It was great. Please continue.

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Book of War (4/?) anonymous January 2 2010, 14:40:04 UTC
Honesty is an ailing virtue. This is the only conclusion Ivan can make when he makes no haste on his way to the meeting room.

The air is thick with whispers, words that spread like fire once they are let out. He takes no offense in them, of course, because this was all indented when he put his scarf on making sure the bruises peek tauntingly where the garment fails to cover his skin. And oh, do they whisper.

Someone has hurt Russia. Someone has hurt Russia ( ... )

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