What He Deserves, part 2/4
anonymous
December 6 2009, 05:31:22 UTC
England rips through Antonio’s clothing, as if he bore claws. Antonio’s body is almost lifeless, the way his limbs seem to drop. His eyes are dim and unmoving.
Lovino pulls his knees to his chest helplessly. It’s like his recent growth doesn’t mean anything, because he’s still sitting there like a frightened child. But distancing himself from the sight in front of him all he can do to keep from screaming, from crying.
England is an absolute monster, he has no doubt. And Antonio will have to go on after this. He’ll have to interact with England after this, as if it wasn’t a big deal. Both of them will.
England keeps on laughing. Lovino hates the sound. It's giving him a terrible headache, one that threatens to split his head apart. England claws down Antonio’s sides roughly, and laughs at his gasps. He sees shreds of yellow clothing (it had always looked so pleasant against Antonio's tan skin) being stripped from Antonio's form, and he wonders if England does have claws, to be able to tear clothing so easily
( ... )
Re: What He Deserves, part 2/4
anonymous
December 6 2009, 11:06:52 UTC
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a-anon this is so good i feel like i'm romano, like i'm inside his head and seeing and feeling everything he is and it just breaks my heart guhhbblgrkk waiting for moreee
What He Deserves, part 3/4
anonymous
December 20 2009, 03:56:00 UTC
After England thrusts deeply into Antonio, he pulls back out at an agonizingly slow pace. Lovino sees Antonio’s teeth clench together, and his bound hands ball into fists.
When England pushes back in, Antonio’s body lurches, so much that his head hits the cold floor, away from the carpet. His collarbone digs into the floor, making a horrifying scraping sound. Had he always been that thin, his bones that sharp? It was true that they had less food lately, but he always managed to feed Lovino, and he never seemed malnourished or unhealthy, not when he was so congenial and pleasant.
As he eyes those frail bones, England sets a pace, thrusting in and out. Antonio can’t contain his cries. They are uncontrolled, almost savage.
Then Lovino notices that he’s bleeding, after England pulls out all of the way before pushing back in. In those seconds, the carpet beneath his hips are stained with drops of red
( ... )
What He Deserves, part 4/4
anonymous
December 20 2009, 04:29:29 UTC
He stays as still as possible, hoping that England is done, and will leave them alone. Instead, England walks around the room casually, his steps loud and aggressive. His eyes are lively, searching around. And his hand reaches out, to grab trinkets. He stops at tables and shelves, taking more objects into his hands. Lovino doesn’t pay attention to what he is taking, and doesn't care. He turns away and stares at the floor mindlessly
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Re: What He Deserves, part 4/4
anonymous
December 20 2009, 07:01:48 UTC
You know, you shouldn't apologize for the nonfluff and noncomfort. It feels that there's really no hint of realism to a majority of the fills in this meme. We tend to forget. This story sorta was a quick snap out of that fantasy.
Terrifying and yet bone chillingly true. Good job anon.
Re: What He Deserves, part 4/4
anonymous
December 20 2009, 11:28:07 UTC
“It happens so often-to us nations-but I didn’t want you to know.”
Lost it. Manly tears, etc. This was exceedingly well done author!anon, the effort you put into really shows. As others have commented, it's wonderfully (and harrowingly) realistic and I really like that. Perhaps masochistically, I especially enjoyed the lack of comfort from Lovino at the end. Thank you~
Re: What He Deserves, part 4/4
anonymous
December 21 2009, 04:28:17 UTC
I loved how unrelentingly brutal this was.
And what I like best is that, as sorry as I feel for Spain, I couldn't quite believe him when he claimed he never did this to other nations - which makes the whole thing all the more disturbing.
Immortality's a bitch that way; sooner or later what goes around comes around.
B-but still, baaaaaawww Spain. Eat tomatoes and get better, bb! D:
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Lovino pulls his knees to his chest helplessly. It’s like his recent growth doesn’t mean anything, because he’s still sitting there like a frightened child. But distancing himself from the sight in front of him all he can do to keep from screaming, from crying.
England is an absolute monster, he has no doubt. And Antonio will have to go on after this. He’ll have to interact with England after this, as if it wasn’t a big deal. Both of them will.
England keeps on laughing. Lovino hates the sound. It's giving him a terrible headache, one that threatens to split his head apart. England claws down Antonio’s sides roughly, and laughs at his gasps. He sees shreds of yellow clothing (it had always looked so pleasant against Antonio's tan skin) being stripped from Antonio's form, and he wonders if England does have claws, to be able to tear clothing so easily ( ... )
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I must be horrible to want to see more of this but. I do.
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a-anon this is so good
i feel like i'm romano, like i'm inside his head and seeing and feeling everything he is and it just breaks my heart guhhbblgrkk
waiting for moreee
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When England pushes back in, Antonio’s body lurches, so much that his head hits the cold floor, away from the carpet. His collarbone digs into the floor, making a horrifying scraping sound. Had he always been that thin, his bones that sharp? It was true that they had less food lately, but he always managed to feed Lovino, and he never seemed malnourished or unhealthy, not when he was so congenial and pleasant.
As he eyes those frail bones, England sets a pace, thrusting in and out. Antonio can’t contain his cries. They are uncontrolled, almost savage.
Then Lovino notices that he’s bleeding, after England pulls out all of the way before pushing back in. In those seconds, the carpet beneath his hips are stained with drops of red ( ... )
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Shoot.
I need fluff now, stat...
No but seriously awesome.
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Terrifying and yet bone chillingly true. Good job anon.
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Lost it. Manly tears, etc.
This was exceedingly well done author!anon, the effort you put into really shows. As others have commented, it's wonderfully (and harrowingly) realistic and I really like that. Perhaps masochistically, I especially enjoyed the lack of comfort from Lovino at the end. Thank you~
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The end killed me, really, in an awesome sad way.
Love it <3
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And what I like best is that, as sorry as I feel for Spain, I couldn't quite believe him when he claimed he never did this to other nations - which makes the whole thing all the more disturbing.
Immortality's a bitch that way; sooner or later what goes around comes around.
B-but still, baaaaaawww Spain. Eat tomatoes and get better, bb! D:
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Please, where are the firsts parts of this!!?? I need to know!!!
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