The screen flickers to life, bobs and sways. It’s a bad recording; Alfred knows this but could seriously care a lot less. It catches her movements, the control of her body as she shifts from one spot to another. It shows her beautiful legs and how the little green skirt whispers over them when she pivots. And if he looks hard enough - and he often does - Alfred is sure he can see just a glimpse of what’s under that skirt. Her hair is perfect, an enviable shade of shining gold as it relocates itself to compensate her movements. It whips around and clings to her bare shoulders in lovely strands
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Re: Prologue
anonymous
November 23 2009, 15:23:50 UTC
oh shit-- this is the first time I've ever read an SM fusion this way. (guys to to girls thing)... I have to say I'm lovin it just for the fact it might be USUK XD;;;;;;
Re: Prologue
anonymous
November 23 2009, 19:56:42 UTC
Your loyal beta-reader is here! You know what I think about this, already, but to reiterate, Al sounds like a bit of a creep (in a good way, I can't wait for his meeting with England/Arthur), the tension is fantastic, and did I mention I love the description of England punching a dude out? Awesome.
Chapter 1a
anonymous
November 30 2009, 22:00:00 UTC
“Man has thrived in space since the disaster, but there is debate about how much was lost in Earth’s sudden decline.”
Alfred’s history class is probably his least favorite. This isn’t to say that he doesn’t think history is interesting -- he rather enjoys the subject - it just so happens that this particular class and this particular teacher are not to his liking. Most days - like today - the instructor speaks a few meaningless words and promptly turns on a very dull video. No deep meaning discussions on intergalactic relations. Neither are there any lessons about that abandoned rock that remains their closest neighbor. Not only does this fly in the face of all Alfred thinks history should be; he is also sure that most of these videos in question have been around longer than the dome and by default are horribly out-of-date.
“We’ve gotten a hold of space travel and self-preservation, but a lot of our advanced technology has been lost.”It is during these rather droll videos that Alfred most enjoys pulling out his pictures of England
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Chapter 1b
anonymous
November 30 2009, 22:06:31 UTC
The monitor flickers until it fades and the lights come to their full splendor. Alfred continues his daydreaming as the teacher steps forward and speaks a few last words before dismissing the class. Alfred prolongs his departure, choosing to wait till everyone had filed out of the class room. Once alone - the teacher has left as well - Alfred lets out a sigh. School is boring, home is boring
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Chapter 1d
anonymous
November 30 2009, 22:11:22 UTC
It is then that Alfred realizes that green thing that is so expertly escaping the monster’s clutches is England. The figure dodging the monster’s authority is undoubtedly England in all her glory; green miniskirt fluttering in the breeze, blond hair struggling to keep up with her swift movements, and the cursing that sounds like water flowing from her pursed lips, it’s all a part of an essential whole
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Re: Chapter 1d
anonymous
December 1 2009, 03:01:14 UTC
I can't wait to actually show her using them~!!! Hetlia has provided me with very minor support characters such as Tony, it would be a waste not to use him!! 8D
Ha ha...I guess I got to this second.
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Hmm. Does 'England' have 'her' own fandom and toys, etc, in this world, I wonder?
I'll be looking forward to reading more of this, in any case.
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She's got a few very dedicated fans out there, but she is very oblivious to this. As for toys....
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(anon from other fill btw)
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..f5
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That's just England for you~ Her powers aren't exactly as 'destructive' as everyone else's is going to be. Her solution is brute force~
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“Man has thrived in space since the disaster, but there is debate about how much was lost in Earth’s sudden decline.”
Alfred’s history class is probably his least favorite. This isn’t to say that he doesn’t think history is interesting -- he rather enjoys the subject - it just so happens that this particular class and this particular teacher are not to his liking. Most days - like today - the instructor speaks a few meaningless words and promptly turns on a very dull video. No deep meaning discussions on intergalactic relations. Neither are there any lessons about that abandoned rock that remains their closest neighbor. Not only does this fly in the face of all Alfred thinks history should be; he is also sure that most of these videos in question have been around longer than the dome and by default are horribly out-of-date.
“We’ve gotten a hold of space travel and self-preservation, but a lot of our advanced technology has been lost.”It is during these rather droll videos that Alfred most enjoys pulling out his pictures of England ( ... )
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I can't wait to see if America genderbends as well (and if he figures out that this might make England a guy as well) so update soon please?
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Fight sceeeenes, I'm so jealous you can write them as well as you do. Seriously. I second the liking England's power thing.
I didn't mention this, but I really like how Tony was the Luna character. I was assuming it'd be a minor character or something instead.
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