Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32



Thanks to anon's suggestions we are now enforcing a past-part fills post

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How to leave the closet (1/?) anonymous November 21 2009, 22:42:28 UTC
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=15448866

"America x England, just straight-up smut.
Bonus points if it's England's first time~"

I kind of added a storyline. Wooophs, sorry! Smut will come, though~Arthur sat in the park smoking his eleventh cigarette that evening while he patiently tried to persuade himself into going home. It had been two hours already, and besides his red lips that were heated up from the smoking his body was turning cold as ice. As he moved his feet in order to stand and straighten up in his back, he could see how his legs were shaking, and his actions suddenly occurred very ridiculous to him ( ... )

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Re: How to leave the closet (6/?) anonymous November 24 2009, 22:40:39 UTC
A little smut in today's chapter, a lot more later on 8D It's a promise <3

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Re: How to leave the closet (6/?) anonymous November 23 2009, 10:17:38 UTC
Love this so much!!

Can't wait for more XD

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How to leave the closet (7/?) anonymous November 24 2009, 21:54:02 UTC
They entered what apparently was Alfred’s place. Arthur came in, Arthur saw, Arthur was dumfounded ( ... )

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How to leave the closet (8/?) anonymous November 24 2009, 21:56:46 UTC
“Was just wondering,” he mumbled. Alfred walked to him, handing him one of the glasses. “Thanks.” He took it, looked down into the bright liquid. It was Friday, there wasn’t any work to get up to the next morning, but still he couldn’t help but wonder whether it was that smart to start drinking now. When he drank, he often said too much about things that shouldn’t be mentioned at all, and when he first had begun, he couldn’t stop himself. But then again - it was just one glass. One single glass ( ... )

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How to leave the closet (9/?) anonymous November 24 2009, 21:59:05 UTC
As he unlocked the door again, it was in the calmest way he could manage, and he got out while nonchalantly saying: “Oh yeah, I forgot to thank you for helping me out back there in the park, didn’t I? I’m really thankful.” But as he entered the living room once again, Alfred was nowhere to be seen. Arthur scratched the back of his neck, turning his head from side to side. “Alfred ( ... )

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How to leave the closet (10/?) anonymous November 24 2009, 22:01:24 UTC
“Come on,” Alfred whispered and leaned in so that his breath tickled Arthur’s ear, “come on, touch me.” Arthur reached forward a shaking hand, zipping Alfred’s pants open. Alfred’s lips curved into a smile, he could feel against his skin, and the young man’s teeth locked around his earlobe. “Mhmm, tug me out,” he guided. Arthur leaned his forehead against Alfred’s shoulder while following the other’s guiding.

‘No underwear,’ he noticed in silence, wrinkling down the pants a little in order to be able to get his hand down. He wrapped his fingers around the hot meat and delightedly felt how it throbbed in his hand ( ... )

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Re: How to leave the closet (10/?) anonymous November 25 2009, 01:33:32 UTC
Oh wow Authoranon that was so hot! WHY WOULD YOU LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER THERE!?

Anyway~ I just want to offer one tip. When you are writing out a dialog like:

“Gin&tonic is fine, right?”

Do not use the "&" symbol. Just say "and."

Besides that you are doing a great job~

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Re: How to leave the closet (10/?) anonymous November 25 2009, 03:39:04 UTC
omai.

author-non, that was so hot, yet so bittersweet.

I DEMAND A CONTINUATION NOW. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. ;w;

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Re: How to leave the closet (10/?) anonymous November 25 2009, 14:33:29 UTC
OMG!!! I WANT MORE!

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Re: How to leave the closet (10/?) anonymous November 25 2009, 18:54:17 UTC
oh god.. that as hot.... and emotional. Usually I don't go for fics featuring the promiscuous gay man stereotype, but the way you've juxtaposed that with Arthur's severe closeted mentality is really refreshing and thrilling to read. Please more!

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How to leave the closet (11/?) anonymous November 27 2009, 01:06:48 UTC
Thank you for all your nice comments! It really makes me happy to see, that my story is being read! <3 I do hope this next chapter won't disappoint!

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Arthur was running. In which direction he wasn’t sure, but he was running for his dear life.

‘That just didn’t happen, that just didn’t happen!´ The denial was like a chant in his head, but every time he threw a look down at his hand, the images of those same fingers wrapped around Alfred’s cock burned the tears to his eyes, and he whimpered, felt weak and vulnerable ( ... )

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How to leave the closet (12/?) anonymous November 27 2009, 01:08:51 UTC
“What do I think?” Arthur gave his words a second thought. And then: “Ooh, that’s what you mean!” As he realised what the guy was out for, he felt his cheeks darken, and his eyes widened up while his brain tried to fix a decent sentence for him to turn the other down with ( ... )

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How to leave the closet (13/?) anonymous November 27 2009, 01:11:14 UTC
‘This is sick.’ Arthur shoved his hands into the pockets of the jacket to keep them warm as he wandered on. ‘This whole evening had been nothing but sick. I can never show my face here again. I do not want to either. That Alfred is surely going to spread the word. Arthur - easy to get, easy to make cum. How embarrassing.’ Arthur bit onto his lower lip, lowering his gaze to the ground in front of him as he walked. This could mean he had to do with women for the rest of his life. At least they didn’t make him cum quickly. ‘They don’t make you cum at all, idiot.’The area Arthur was walking in was slowly turning more city-like. Ahead of him he could see the neon-signs and the bars and the music slowly started to play again. He could hear it again. But he didn’t feel young from the beat, and he stopped op, not wanting to walk into that area. When all kind of stuff happened from him here, what wouldn’t happen if he walked straight into the centre of the gay-community ( ... )

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Re: How to leave the closet (13/?) anonymous November 27 2009, 01:26:03 UTC
I think you meant cab, not cap

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Re: How to leave the closet (13/?) anonymous November 27 2009, 09:18:12 UTC
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*checks dictionary*
Ahh, cr** xD" That's what you get for writing at night. I'll correct it in my own document, thanks!

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