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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

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Part 00 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 00:26:41 UTC

Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/11411.html?replyto=24301459

England being a pedo and getting off watching a very young Matthew and Alfred roughhouse and and wrestle with each other.

Many many years later, the two of them tie him to a chair somewhere and give him a full show.

...Yeah.

(Can/Ame, please? Don't care how it goes if they decide to include England in at the end, though.)

Heh - sorry, this fill has been usurping author!anon's mind all week ^^ As a result, it kind of turned into a long, epic thing. Sorry about that ^^ OP, I hope this is good for you :)

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 02:46:18 UTC

... oh my god. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFTT THIS IS SO AMAZING, WHAT CAN I SAY

hothothothothot Okay, my mind is officially blown. I'm sorry for being so incoherent, anon! XD

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 09:18:16 UTC

LOL! XD Awesome! Author!anon thanks you for your enjoyment; it's what keeps her going, after all!

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 03:28:26 UTC

this was both gorgeous and sad... I absolutely loved it to pieces. The one critique I have is that Canada calling England "-san" those couple of times seemed at odds with the rest of the fill. But still it was a wonderful, wonderful fill. Very sensual and hot, but the dynamics with England as the outsider were just... ;___;

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 21 2009, 09:21:15 UTC

Author!anon thanks you for reading, and agrees that England's dynamic was sadder than she'd intended. I tend to go with the source regards to things like -san, and I thought Canada referred to England as such, but I could definitely be wrong. I@m very glad you enjoyed the fill :)

...*nosebleed anonymous November 21 2009, 05:54:10 UTC

Wow, that was brilliantly written! The suggestive lines like 'milk and honey' were beautiful and some of the one liners just made me jump out of my seat and do a little dance.

“Now. Get in there and fuck him good and proper, boy. Don’t hold back.”

I'm going to repeat this in my head every time I need to do a presentation. Cheers!

Re: ...*nosebleed anonymous November 21 2009, 09:23:51 UTC

Author!anon thanks you so much! Actually, I had two training sessions and a meeting mid-week, and I was so tired I was almost falling asleep. This fill was so all-encompassing that I periodically came around with the fear that I'd unconsciously mentioned Canada's testicles while out of it XD I'm glad you liked the fill! :)

Re: ...*nosebleed anonymous November 22 2009, 03:56:43 UTC

I have so been there. When I'm immersed in a fill, I have to triple-check every paper I write to make sure I haven't done just that.

This was a fantastic fic. I agree that the dynamic was a bit sad, but it's actually nice to see the division between America and England emphasized. Fans tend to skim over that an awful lot.

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 23 2009, 07:09:10 UTC

I.

Jesusfuck.

WOW.

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 25 2009, 05:48:18 UTC

Holy shit. That was perfect! Your grasp of the relationships between these characters, and the dynamics that define them, is breath taking. I haven't seen someone blend history, canon, and fanon as well as you have right her for a very long time.

The only thing that didn't fit for me was the Japanese, Canada is certainly respectful towards England (and it is a shame there is no good english/french equivalent) but the 'san' was a little out of character. Overall though a beautiful fill, the tension between them all was wonderfully executed.

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous November 28 2009, 08:29:05 UTC

OP just found this- she was caught in the crazy turkey rush. And OP is very, very glad she found this. Anon, this is... amazing. I really didn't know where to go with the prompt- I just tossed it out as a picture in my head, and you took it and made it work in to something far more wonderful then anything I pictured. You write them very well, and the dynamic makes my heart break- the lines of loyalty and love and could-have-had's are obvious, and that makes this even better. Really enjoyable. Thank you for writing it.

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous December 3 2009, 17:28:15 UTC

ILU Anon. Twincest and incest and mental anguish oh mai. You win. It isnt' often that I read a fic that makes me forget where I am until I finish reading.

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous December 7 2009, 15:21:34 UTC

Oh England.

You crazy masochist. This broke my heart.

Re: Part 11 - Canada/America + England Tied Up and Watching - "The Deeds of Others" anonymous December 25 2009, 13:49:19 UTC

...fuck.

that was - amazing, writer!anon.

You left me speechless .A.

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