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[Part Six] Romano/Alfred--Romano thinks Alfred is a Girl anonymous November 10 2009, 19:59:22 UTC
Original Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=17290018#t17290018

Really quick request summary: Romano meets Alfred and thinks he is a she. He tries to get 'her' to act lady like and develops a crush. Then Spain takes him back home and Romano promise to return to her one day.

So this fic developed a mind of its own and diverged a bit, so you get chibi, teenage, and present day Romano thinking Alfred is a girl.

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Re: OP<3 anonymous December 9 2009, 00:04:43 UTC
Glad you like! I always worry I do not write children well, but it amuses my beta so I decided it wasn't horrible...
My favorite part about writing Hetalia is the history :)
I had to a project for Spanish of pre-Colombian cultures so I couldn't resist including a bit.
Oh, and do you mind that I am going to skip soon to their teenage years? (Aka America's Revolution--I have plans with America, Romano, and the Bad Friends Trio.)

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Re: My Fair Lady (4/?) anonymous December 8 2009, 23:27:33 UTC
not gonna lie, I thought you abandoned this fill. I'm so glad to see that it updated! It's such a cute premise. I love innocent chibimerica. So cute! And seeing it all through romano's eyes is even better.

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Re: My Fair Lady (4/?) anonymous December 9 2009, 00:16:52 UTC
I was worried I had :) But suddenly and coincidentally with a project due, I started writing a lot, hehehe. Next part should be out Friday or Saturday.

I'm glad you like it! Romano is fun to write. Hopefully he's not too OOC. I didn't really like him before I started writing this and found some amazing, adorable pics with child!Romano and Spain on Pixiv

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Re: My Fair Lady (5/?) anonymous December 12 2009, 05:11:46 UTC
Unbeta'd, sorry.
*****

“Aren’t you going to come with me?”

“I’m not suppose to go farther.”

“Why?”

“Nizhoni says there are monsters that shine in the sun and have sticks that go boom! They ride giant dogs and hurt people.”

An image of Antonio and his soldiers flashed in Romano’s mind but he dismissed it. They weren’t monsters. The Spaniards were men of God. “There aren’t any monsters. And I would protect you if there were ( ... )

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Notes anonymous December 12 2009, 05:15:17 UTC
Gah! I almost de-annoned myself. My computer keeps thinking am mean to click things when I don’t want to.
--My headcanon says Spain is really against non-catholic religions/people in this time period between Ferdinand and Isabella’s Inquisition and the work of Spanish missionaries. And while Romano holds Rome, the center of the Catholic faith, I do not see him understanding it all because he is a kid.
--‘Little upstart’ would be England, who was a developing empire in the late 1500’s.
--Raise your hand if you think Romano is a bit of a masochist. *author!anon raises hand*

So next update should be around Wednesday. At least I am hoping for Wednesday, but finals might make it a bit hard.

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Happy not-op is happy! anonymous December 12 2009, 18:22:04 UTC
I was very glad to see all of your updates! It was a perfect reward for me after taking so many exams last week. I hope all of your exams go well this week!

I just love how cute America and Romano are together! And Romano's masochistic interpretations of Francis's lady-gettin' skills! So funny!

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Re: My Fair Lady (6/?) anonymous December 17 2009, 02:24:36 UTC
Unbeta'ed again.
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Romano carefully checked himself in the mirror. There was no way he would embarrass himself in front of America. He had spent decades on gentlemanly manners to impress her.

He smirked at his reflection. He wore a fine waistcoat and pressed trousers. Both his stockings and shoes were new and clean.

Romo! He could imagine her surprised glee. Romano would kiss her hand and she would giggle. He had planned for and dreamed of meeting her again for over a century ( ... )

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Notes anonymous December 17 2009, 02:36:57 UTC
Oops--the year is 1778, btw.

--France enters the Revolutionary War in 1778 and Spain, with their alliance with France, enters in 1779. But of course, both have been unofficially supporting Americans (like selling ammunition)
--I used http://www.memorialhall.mass.edu/activities/dressup/index.html to base off clothing but my mental picture (and a good number of Revolutionary War paintings) seem to go more with 1700 than the actual 1770s.

My draft for the next part is kind of missing so I am re-writing it. So Sunday should be my next posting time.

recaptcha-- Shelia incite. O.o Australia has nothing to do with this.

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OP anonymous December 18 2009, 23:51:17 UTC
LOL oh poor Romano...so clueless. And you are one awesome anon for including the slap bonus! I can't wait to see more Teen S!Italy and wild-child America.

*Thumbs-up with the power of a thousand charging bulls!*

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Re: My Fair Lady (6/?) anonymous January 19 2010, 05:13:53 UTC
(not op) What happened writer!anon? Where did you go? I do hope you finish! :D

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