Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

[hetalia_kink]

Thanks to anon's suggestions we are now enforcing a past-part fills post

Fresh past-part fills post HERE

Comments and Suggestions go here

Don't forget to link your new fill at the fill index over here.
Remember though that you need not post your updates unless you posted in a new  part

Keep yourself up to date -- check out the NEWS HERE

Comments

Part 5 Russia and Girl!America as Humbert and Lolita 1/?

[anonymous]

Since no one else filled this prompt, I figured I’d give it a go! Behold as I utterly FAIL at purple prose, creating an interesting backstory for pedo!Ivan, making this story more than just a Lolita-with-the-only-the-names-switched thing, and so on.

Emily

Vladimir Nabokov’s classic Lolita has always been one of my favorite books. At last, I thought, here is someone who understands what it is like. For like the unfortunate Humbert, I too have desired and craved my own Lolita. I too have loved a girl-child as he loved his Dolores. My dear bright glorious Emily, my nymphet, my sin, my soul; light of my life, fire of my loins!

Reading through Lolita again I can clearly see how eerily similar my life has been to the story of the book’s protagonist. I loved sweet Emily like no other and yet she is gone gone gone…

Ah, but you do not want to hear my inane begging for what I have lost, do you? No, what you want is how I arrived to be the pitiful shell of a man I am. Fine. You shall have what you want.

Re: Re-Do Part 5 Russia and Girl!America as Humbert and Lolita 5b/?

[anonymous]

Anon, this is...

This is...

Wow.

I absolutely love the way you write Ivan's first person point-of-view, and your portrayls of Natasha and Alfred Emily are fantastic. :) I've actually never read Lolita, although it is high on my reading list, but from what I know of it, this definately does it justice. I can't wait to see more of this. <3

Re: Re-Do Part 5 Russia and Girl!America as Humbert and Lolita 5b/?

[anonymous]

fffffff

anon, this is great. please keep going!

Part 5 Russia and Girl!America as Humbert and Lolita 6/?

[anonymous]

I've decided that the whole story is Ivan talking to his reflection in a mirror after everything in the story has already happened. He's pretty much trying to justify to himself everything he's done to both Girl!America and his sister etc and it's not really working. Just in case anyone's wondering who his "audience" is and why he's not talking to a jury like in the book.

6

For this next section of the Confessions of Ivan Fyodorovich Braginski, I admit that I did indeed have qualms about lusting after my niece. One’s own flesh-and-blood: the ultimate forbidden love. But again, faithful audience, you must remember that Emily is not human. I truly cannot stress this enough. I am not enough of a monster to go after an actual child as you and I and God knows them to be, innocent and frail, vulnerable and pure. I would never prey upon one of them. But daemon embodied in childish flesh, golden and honeyed, bedecked with twin sapphires and just tempting me

Re: Part 5 Russia and Girl!America as Humbert and Lolita 6/?

[anonymous]

Recapthca wants to note 'fense, Ensnared'. How interesting. Just not anywhere near as interesting as this fill. I- I don't consider this as hitting any of my kinks, and I'm a bit freaked, but you've written this so lovely(ly?)! I'm really pulled in: the use of first person really works here.

Re: Part 5 Russia and Girl!America as Humbert and Lolita 6/?

[anonymous]

This is so amazing, anon~ It must continue. <3