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Re: Under the Sun [14a/?]

[anonymous]

The next thing Alfred was aware of was that he was lying in a bed. He couldn’t remember how he got there, or when he had even lost consciousness. One second, he was staring, in shock at the blurred form of Gilbert, the Nation of Prussia, the next

Re: Under the Sun [15e/?]

[anonymous]

He cringed at the memory, glancing away from the men. No one said a word, but each held the same thought Alfred was sure. Truth be told, he himself still was not clear as to what had happened that day. One moment he was in the inn, then on a battlefield. And if hadn’t been until Gilbert’s order that his mind managed to clear. From what he had been told, it had almost seemed like he was in a trance, and not even the gunshot wounds or their voices could snap him from it. Bill had remarked that Gilbert had rushed forward, despite others shouts:

”There was somethin’ in that guys eyes,” Bill had remarked. “He knew what was goin’ on, and how to snap you outta it.”‘Outta’ what, Alfred was still in the dark about

Re: Under the Sun [15f/?]

[anonymous]

With that brief warning, Francis was off. Blue eyes widened, before Alfred followed in pursuit, one hand holding onto the reins while the other kept his hat from flying off. Within a few minutes, he was galloping besides his friend, a sour look crossing the older Nation’s face as he called over. “I see the lessons on proper riding escaped you after all…”

“Nah! This is just how you’re really suppose to ride!”

Something was muttered in French, along with the mention of Antonio (though Alfred didn’t get that last part. He would ask later). Alfred shot his friend a cocky grin. “So, where are we goin’?”

“I already told you, it is a surprise.” Came the equally cheeky response. “Patience, my dear Alfred, patience.”

Alfred really hated the ominous tone that accompanied those words. He really did not like that

Re: Under the Sun Notes

[anonymous]

Translations:
mon frère = my brother
Dios = God
Irish Slang:
Sprog = Kid
Rossie = Brat
Scuttered = Drunk

Re: Under the Sun Notes

[anonymous]

Fooled by Ireland! :O

This was soo good anon!! Really excited for what happens next!

Re: Under the Sun Notes

[anonymous]

Author!anon, you're really good. You had us think that England's going to show up in this chapter. Not that I don't care for some Ireland action. I love the whole of The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland (+ Ireland) anyway. Are all of them gonna show up? Minus Sealand because he doesn't exist yet.

France, nooooooooooooo! Paul you sonnovabitch. Mess with one member of the Bad Friends Trio and you're messing with the whole lot. Prepare to be conquered so hard. Conquistador!Spain, Badass (when is he not?)!Prussia and Napoleon Era!France. If America allows it. Stop being stubborn, dammit. D:

And also, school first. We don't want you to get failing marks. If we have to wait, so be it. This fic is worth waiting for a long time, anyway.

Re: Under the Sun Notes

[anonymous]

...Uh, by Paul I totally meant Trent. Or whatever the bad guy's name is. I forgot. Excuse my phail over there, authornon. D:

Re: Under the Sun Notes

[anonymous]

The UK really was in the house /o/ I'm sure that Ireland would love to know how much he resembles England. I think Alfred should tell him. *3*

And I know some punk did not just shoot France. A certain gang is about to become nothing but a bad memory very soon. But it is suspicious that Francis took him out so far...I hope Paul and Bill are okay. Molly and Vincent too. Is Alfred's nationhood about to be discovered?

Chess playing Prussia is always love. Spain=love. Bad Friends Trio FTW. ♥

Good luck with school authoranon! Study hard! As much as I love this fill, you should definitely focus on school.

Re: Under the Sun Notes

[anonymous]

Different anon here was also thinking about (and kind of wants) Alfred's nationhood being discovered by the humans. It'd be cool to have a few people know and keep the secret! That'd be hell to explain though.

Recaptcha says: armful revolution. Oh, I have a feeling the next chapter will be kick ass!

Re: Under the Sun [16a/?]

[anonymous]

Muskets were firing all around him. Alfred could smell the smoke rising into the air. He was firing too, like the men besides him. His friends, his comrades. He could hear the orders from his generals. Fire, reload, fire, reload. It was a cycle. He took aim, pulling the trigger, staring at the mysterious man across from him. His heart was pounding in his ears, canons shaking him to the core.

This man had harmed his friend. This man across from him could have killed his friend. The anger surged through him. More orders were shouted, more shouts

Re: Under the Sun [16b/?]

[anonymous]

“We’re Nations kid,” came an amused voice. He looked to his right, where Gilbert was standing arms crossed over his chest. There was an amused smirk on his face, but a strange look in his eyes. “Nothin’ like that will kill us.”

“Ah, but it does sting.” Alfred jumped, toppling over in pure shock. It resulted in laughter from both Antonio, and a now sitting up Francis. The French Nation continued to smile, though it became sheepish under Alfred’s stare. His hand pressed against the head wound. “Je suis désolé. but we needed to test a theory

Re: Under the Sun [16c/?]

[anonymous]

“America,” Gilbert began, Alfred already knowing the importance of the following words. “Before your Revolution, you were merely a colony. Right? Right. It wasn’t until you gained your freedom that you were recognized as a Nation, one of us

Re: Under the Sun [16d/?]

[anonymous]

“Cerrado!” The Spaniard flushed darkly, huffing slightly as he looked away. “Regardless! When we were both still very young, just fledgling countries really, we had gone out. Some of the local children in João’s home wanted to play with us. Of course, we did. But we all went out too far. Bandits attacked. One of the children was killed in front of me. João was the eldest there, so he told all of us to run home. He always carried a knife with him, so he was prepared. But some of the children were too terrified… And then the men knocked João to the ground, crushed his arm. That was when the illusion of a battlefield came to my mind. I can’t remember to this day what occurred, one moment I was trying to get some of the younger children to run. Then I heard him scream. Then, much like yourself, I was on a battlefield. Then, João was pulling be off of one of the men, I turned around still thinking I was at war, slicing him across the cheek with his own knife. After that day, the children in his house, ones I had befriended, were terrified

Re: Under the Sun [16e/?]

[anonymous]

“Of course!” Antonio chirped sitting up, crossing his legs. “It’s a bit difficult… It took me a very long time. But there is a way. And we’ll help you

OP

[anonymous]

You are amazing Author!Anon. Sorry for the lack of replying lately.
Everyone seems to like to keep me busy. XDDDDD

Anyway, I love your badass trio so much. I can't wait for more, and time skip~ <3 <3 <3

Re: Under the Sun [16e/?]

[anonymous]

oh fucking hell i hate de-anoning

Oh so fucking good, author!anon! Right now I can't give you a proper review seeing that my eyelids keeps dropping down and I'm studying for college entrance exams (and thus my brain is rendered mush) and I'm only commenting on this in between. Still, I was like O___O (this emoticon will serve as a replacement for a proper adjective to describe my feelings) when they shot France for experimentation (or was it demonstration I kinda forgot). So hardcore, Bad Friends Trio.

...Paul, what happened to you? That bastard Trent seems to be getting more brutal in his efforts to freak America out. Hah. I'll enjoy his ass being whooped by America. Better not mess with your own nation, you... insolent cowboy (argh what the hell is this i give up sorrt writer!anon).

Pffffffffft captcha you never cease to crack me up: toxicity England