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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

Thanks to anon's suggestions we are now enforcing a past-part fills post

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HERE IT IS: Something In Between (1/I dunno yet.) anonymous July 30 2009, 21:19:16 UTC

SORRY GUYS. AUTHOR ANON IS MADE OF FAIL AND HAD TO WORK EXTRA HOURS THIS WEEK. HERE IS THE SHOTA I PROMISED. (Dear god, why can I never resist the urge to write shota...)

Also, imagine Alfred to be whatever age you wish. I had the idea for him to be on the way to maturity (as will be apparent later), but not all the way there yet by a long shot.

~~~~~

Arthur stepped off the boat and breathed in the smell of forest, of sand, of warm sun and frosty mountains. He truly loved the smell of America.

Speaking of whom...

This was strange. Alfred was usually tripping over his own feet to run out and greet him. Now, he didn't even see the boy anywhere. He took off his hat and scanned the area, searching for that small golden head that should be rocketing toward him any minute now--

"ARTHUR!"

"What--"

WHAMArthur landed on his face with something very giggly (and a whole lot heavier than he remembered) latched onto his back. He pushed himself up, stuck between catching his breath and trying not to breathe dirt, and reached around him to ( ... )

Re: Something In Between (4/?) anonymous July 31 2009, 23:33:45 UTC

this anon thinks that angst-that-gets-resolved stories are some of the best out there.

I can't wait to read the next part!

Re: Something In Between (4/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 00:58:13 UTC

Oh, thank you! Author-anon does, too. (That's why she writes them. XD)

The next part is in progress!

Re: Something In Between (4/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 02:27:38 UTC

Note: the nail file hadn't been invented at this point, but pumice stones were widely used for the same purpose. And "callous" can be spelled like that. I looked it up.

~~~~~

"Why are you doing this, again?"

"Because your hands are filthy."

"I'm not a girl, you know."

"That doesn't matter. You should still have presentable hands. Otherwise you appear uncivilized and unprofessional."

"Fine. But do you really have to use the stone ( ... )

^^THAT'S PART 5^^ anonymous August 1 2009, 02:29:28 UTC

GOD I HATE LIVEJOURNAL.

Re: Something In Between (4/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 02:35:14 UTC

h-hot.

*nosebleeds*

Re: Something In Between (4/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 04:57:42 UTC

Oh, good. It's having the effect I intended.

It's gonna get better. Just...not tonight. I find I write better when I'm not sleep-deprived.

Re: Something In Between (5/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 02:49:11 UTC

Aww Iggy. Alfred is so sweet! I can't wait for the next part!

Re: Something In Between (4/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 04:30:09 UTC

PEDO!BEAR ANON APPROVES OF THIS.

Something In Between (6/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 16:45:22 UTC

~~~~~

Arthur ultimately decided that alcohol wasn't the best option at this point, given the circumstances, and ended up in his room for the rest of the night, waiting for Alfred to go to bed. When he had heard Alfred's door close for the night and waited an hour, he ventured into the kitchen for a glass of wine to calm his nerves.

He was approaching the door to Alfred's room when he heard something that made him stop deaed in his tracks. The door to his room hadn't been closed all the way, and from inside, Arthur could hear that his breath had become rapid and uneven, and that he was by no means still.

Oh, god, is he alright? Later, Arthur would blame this thought for starting the large cluster of problems that arose that night. To be fair, it could have been anything: sickness, some kind of fit, he could have hurt himself, he could be in serious pain and Arthur wouldn't have known while he was locked away sulking ( ... )

Something In Between (6.5/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 16:51:36 UTC

Quick as lightning, Arthur was out of the room and down the hall to his own before Alfred could even fully wake up. He threw himself onto his bed, gasping for breath, trying his damnedest to will his straining, pulsing, very uncomfortable erection back down. After a minute, he realized that, even if he managed to bring himself back down, it would be too painful to be worth it in the morning ( ... )

Re: Something In Between (6.5/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 19:04:46 UTC

I love where this is going. Please continue soon writer anon!

Re: Something In Between (6.5/?) anonymous August 1 2009, 20:10:56 UTC

YES, ANON, YES. THIS.

I'm SO excited for more. <3

Re: Something In Between (6.5/?) anonymous August 2 2009, 22:06:46 UTC

*huffhuff*
Anon. Anon...! This...!
Honestly, I like the switching of perspectives. It's refreshing, IMO.
Also, there is just the right amount of angst; not too much, but just right.
Oh carry on, author!anon. Carry on...

Something In Between (7/?) anonymous August 6 2009, 04:50:16 UTC

I'M BAAAAACK. Test went well. It's actually pretty interesting, how many ideas I got while studying for a psychology test. Also, author anon did not use the terms "poker face" or "doorknob" because neither of those were invented (poker, not the poker face) until the 1800s. Let no one say this anon didn't do her research (because that's so important here). Although, she isn't sure if multi-room houses would be terribly common, but...come on, he's the nation.

Also, here be ellipsis abuse. Just saying.The next night, as well as quite a few after it, passed with relative calm. Each morning, they would have breakfast, talk about everything going on in this colony or that country, make jokes and laugh with each other. In the afternoon, they would go out and visit the city, or they would go riding somewhere new, or they would simply stay at home and enjoy each other's company, playing games in the field outside his house and racing each other around the world and back again, just for the sheer fun of it. In the evening, Arthur would teach ( ... )

Something In Between (7.5/?) anonymous August 6 2009, 04:52:06 UTC

He wondered this late at night, after the sun was long gone, the moon glimmering through his window, its grin full of malice--or malicious joy. Was it alright, he would ask himself, idly unbuttoning his shirt and smoothing his hands down his chest, tweaking and pinching and grazing his fingernails over his skin. Imagining bigger hands, rougher fingers, those lips pressed to his again...

Was it alright, to want this? To want to feel him, all of him, hold him tightly and never let go, not ever, never let anyone else have him, keep him all to himself? Was it alright for a colony to want to possess his country?

No, he didn't want to possess Arthur, not in any way that would put him in a position of power over him...at least, not yet.

No, if anything, he wanted Arthur to possess him, to make him his, consume him, touch him everywhere, everywhere he couldn't reach on his own, and everywhere he could. But, Arthur still saw him as a child...he just wouldn't take him seriously. There was no way he would do something like that, something ( ... )

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