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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

Thanks to anon's suggestions we are now enforcing a past-part fills post

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Parentage anonymous November 20 2009, 21:30:12 UTC

Prompt, from part seven.
"General Winter is Canada's father."
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=18363600#t18363600

Anon would very much like to apologize for forgetting about the fill promise, I found the prompt against yesterday was like oh hell. BTW, stole your title.

Parentage 1/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 21:35:54 UTC

Matthew scrambled to remember the past sometimes, but it went through his hands like sand. His mind playing over the bitter few memories he did have of then. They were just smells, and feelings. The vague knowledge of a person, with no memory of their face or name. The warmth of fire, the dances, the whispered prayers as he drew a bow and promised the world he would be grateful and use all he was given, furs, fat, sinew, bones. Asking for help as he let go ( ... )

Parentage 2/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 21:36:53 UTC

The winter was warm, and short. Just like they gave the land names, they gave the people names, skrælingar. They held their weapons with nervousness as Matthew and the others and all the people he could find came out from the trees with curious eyes and things to trade. They put their bags down, opening them up to show the pelts and furs. At first weapons were pushed forward, something that made nervousness bubble in Matthew's stomach, but next someone offered milk. He smiled. He wanted the milk and nothing else ( ... )

Parentage 3/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 21:38:01 UTC

But every time Matthew tried to wander off to find the sun-man he'd get grabbed by the scuff of his parka and pulled close again. And they kept walking into the black night, farther and farther west, farther north. Constantly running away from the inevitable truth ( ... )

Parentage 4/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 21:39:03 UTC

"Come here." There was no fatherly love in that voice, Matthew must have hesitated because in an instant he was being tugged on his knees and pushed towards the ice. He glanced back, mouth open with a silent question and father just scowled, pointing at the ice. Matthew stuck out his tongue, turned around and saw ( ... )

Parentage 5/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 21:40:32 UTC

Once they were in a few days of home Matt finally spoke, which did little to warm Winter's heart, "Did you tell them the same things ( ... )

Re: Parentage 5/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 22:55:52 UTC

at the risk of sounding like poland

OH. MY. GOD.

Anon- ...holy shit anon. This is- this is just beautiful! Wonderful! Fantastic!

native-taaaannnsss /makes grabby hands

Re: Parentage 5/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 22:59:18 UTC

*grabs many kleenexes* MY GOD. that was wonderful. I just loveloveloveLOOOVE how you describe scenes; its so beautiful. Your metaphors are delicious and magnificent~ (this anon especially loved the 'sealing away the memories under a sheet of ice in his soul' just made this anon's heart flutter)

Astounding fill~~ <3

Re: Parentage 5/5 anonymous November 20 2009, 23:03:45 UTC

... Holy shit, anon!

This is so damn good, I feel very inadequate as a writer now.

Re: Parentage 5/5 anonymous November 21 2009, 00:03:04 UTC

Holy SHIT, anon. This is the most beautiful thing I've read in this fandom in a very long time. God. There are so many things I want to say here, and so many subtle bits you wove into this I want to touch on, but I just can't make my thoughts coherent.

I love the whole thing, and I love the end, and I have visions tumbling through my head of modern, grown-up Canada coming face to face with General Winter again. This one is going to stay with me a while.

Author-Anon Here! anonymous November 22 2009, 08:45:55 UTC

I wasn't sure if I should respond since it would take up space but becuase the post is closing~

@ grabby hands anon.
As if! You like, totally don't. Your not nearly as like, like-y right?
*Hugs.* Nah, you are wonderful. Seriously, put a smile on my face seeing your response right after I posted. And made me check for everyone else's. Their breasts do not belong to you Korea. Iroquois Confederacy alone was like six nations, so I assume baby Matt had a heck of alot of siblings, even if most must have lived very far off / been Alfred's siblings too. But I'm happy it didn't come off as insulting not really touching on them. I didn't want to do the research to go more in depth. ^^'

@ only anon who didn't swear.Your making me blush. Last paragraph, and the last of part two were basically written in at the last minute to attempt to tie up everything, so I'm glad it didn't come off as jarring. You get a hug too, *Squeezes.* For making me extremely happy, I was worried the metaphors broke up the flow and slowed down the piece, I'm glad ( ... )

Re: Parentage 5/5 anonymous November 23 2009, 06:54:43 UTC

YOU. Such unbelievable love for you right now you don't even KNOW.

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