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Tin Islands Prologue - America, Canada, England, and Roman Empire anonymous November 1 2009, 07:37:59 UTC
Original prompt: America and Canada travel back in time and stumble upon a small, upset England - running away from Rome. They choose to hide the child from Roman Empire and learn more than they anticipate in doing so.

http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12123402#t12123402

A/N: So, it’s going to be a monster. I’ve written so much already and I’m… pathetic. =_= Sorry. BUT IT’S A VERY GOOD IDEA AND OMG THE HISTORY, THE HISTORY! IT DEMANDS THE EPIC VERSION.

Forgive me, I didn’t use the time machine. *hangs head in shame* I cheated and resorted to the much easier explanation of OMG WUT MAGIC. Also, I couldn’t bring myself to make little!England so very little (but he‘s still a child). I hope his age is all right good for you…

Tin Islands: Prologue England never cared much for staying at America’s house ( ... )

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Tin Islands: Prologue B anonymous November 1 2009, 07:41:00 UTC
After dinner, they bickered about a few political issues that had reared up lately. England liked to think about it as a pre-meeting warm up. When the debate fell on England’s side of the fence, America groused and turned on the late evening news. Then he switched it to a cartoon show because the news always meant even more arguing. The cartoon show was about a little elephant from India, which was at least fascinating for a good twenty minutes, since England liked both elephants and India, and America liked anything cute.

It was very pleasant, for as long as it lasted. But when he realized he was blinking more sluggishly than normal, England gave it up. “I’m turning in. If you make us late tomorrow, I’ll kill you and string you up as an example to others.”

“I don’t appreciate that.”

England didn’t doubt it. “Good night,” he said, for propriety’s sake (not like it was a habit or anything, like he used to say so all the time, they were just words “G’night,” America trilled in return, tucking his feet up into the armchair ( ... )

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Tin Islands: Prologue C anonymous November 1 2009, 07:42:38 UTC
England did his best to push the depressing thoughts away once he’d closed the bedroom door behind him. He put on a dressing gown and washed his face. He’d gotten used to the bed, which was both more comfortable and thus more irritating than his own. Once he curled up under the blankets, England put his head to the pillow, hoped he wouldn’t have to drag America kicking and screaming tomorrow to arrive at their meeting on schedule, and fell instantly to sleep.

And dreamt of Roman Empire.

like a fire caught to the corner of your shirt so close it burns but closer still you will never be free of it men pouring into the woods no no no it’s not possible why is this happening the people are scattering flash of steel rain on the villages flood it all away because it is too hard and I cannot hold up under this where are my brothers where are my brothers don’t you touch me I’ll bite your fingers off give me the woad give me the woad

give it to me and I will end this England woke with a start, some scream he’d heard in his head ( ... )

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Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 1 2009, 07:43:50 UTC
Dashed to the floor, quite forgotten, the little toy train (soon to be equipped with lasers and alien technology and all other things America dreamt of, but right now, only a train, a half-finished train) flickered a shy white and then subsided.

Old magic. Old and powerful and lovely, England had called it, but always so mysterious. Miracles were not necessarily what people wanted, but what they needed, even when they had no idea they needed it. And need took root in the smallest, most harmless of thoughts ( ... )

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 1 2009, 08:07:56 UTC
YOU CAN'T JUST END IT THERE!

HEAR MY SOBS OF DISMAY? I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER SO BAD!!!11! /caplocks

It's a really interesting start! I'm glad someone picked up the request since I wouldn't be able to do it justice. Keep up the good work :D

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 1 2009, 08:15:45 UTC
OH WOW! The prologue is so amazing already. D: This is one of those fills where I will be F5-ing like there's no tomorrow, just eagerly waiting for updates.

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 1 2009, 08:30:14 UTC
EPIC LONG FILLS FTW!!!! MORE, MORE! 8D

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 1 2009, 12:57:48 UTC
I think I love you.
You are a very talented writer and I really enjoyed reading this, it has so much potential.
Please continue because that's one monster of a cliff hangner.

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 1 2009, 13:19:59 UTC
Yes please continue writer anon I'll be eegerly waiting for an update! I'll be following this fill.

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 1 2009, 23:43:06 UTC
hgf7udygis do want. Roman occupied Britannia ♥ child molestment and all

Looking forward to where this goes anon!

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 2 2009, 15:02:05 UTC
this is brilliant.

the pace is just about perfect, the characterization works terribly well with the plot, and every line speaks of awesome.

England dreaming of Roman Empire, and then his transformation in Britannia Angel, the magic humming softly, remains of older times, the way you described that part was my favourite for the prologue. it was realistic and beautiful.

and cute canada and his kinship on things america throws away, and america's ICness...

this was truly perfect, and i cannot wait to have more. the ending of the prologue, albeit painful because it means i'll have to wait for more, is also right where it should have been.

please continue, it's really perfect :D

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Re: Tin Islands: Prologue D anonymous November 7 2009, 05:04:51 UTC
Oh wow... what a very promising start! I'm totally drawn in. Great job so far anon!

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Tin Islands: Chapter 1A anonymous November 10 2009, 08:13:07 UTC
A/N: Oh… oh, thank you so much for your wonderful comments. <3 An important note: This story will contain child abuse, physical in nature. (With mild overtones of creepy, non-graphic but still disturbing sexual connotations.) If this is going to upset you, back out now before it’s too late.

Also, I apologize for the slow pace of this. *bows* And the completely inaccurate historical bits, like the fact they all speak English. >.>;;

Tin Islands: Chapter One The fire blazed before them and consumed the village whole ( ... )

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Tin Islands: Chapter 1B anonymous November 10 2009, 08:20:21 UTC
Beyond what remained of the village, there were gently rolling hills and a border of dense forest to the south. The people who had fled were disappearing into that border, swallowed by the gnarled forms of trees, thick underbrush, and a pervading gloom. Canada aimed for much of the same; though the main purpose of the attack seemed to be the destruction and looting of property, not one of the intruders hesitated to take a life.

Intruders. The word felt right. They were in the middle of an invasion of some kind. But where? How?

I just hope I live long enough to have those questions answered, thought Canada. And then I’m not going near America’s house for another decade, at least. It never, ever ends well for me. America, who sprinted beside him, had a new swear word for every time his sneaker hit dirt. The situation being what it was, Canada decided he couldn’t blame him. As they scrambled up the hillside, the sweltering oppression of the fire fell away to a damp and windy howl, far from the July summer they’d been snatched ( ... )

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Tin Islands: Chapter 1C anonymous November 10 2009, 08:22:06 UTC
They must have walked for an hour. Perhaps more. Perhaps less. It was difficult to tell. Canada felt oppressed by the forest, but moreso by the strange age to it. There was a heavy blanket of something in the air, powerful and alert-it was, Canada realized suddenly, a lot like the way the hair on the back of his neck would rise when England would do “magic tricks” for his childhood birthdays. It felt like England’s magic: irate but gentle, with a firm nip for troublemakers but a perchance to show off. Canada had always secretly believed in England’s magic, if only because it seemed special in a way he was not.

He wanted to bring it up to America, but their childhood was a bit of a sore spot. Still, Canada made the effort. “Hey, America. Do you remember when-”

“Not really.”

“I didn’t even ask yet…”

“You’ve got that tone that means I won’t like it ( ... )

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Tin Islands: Chapter 1D anonymous November 10 2009, 08:23:54 UTC
“Can we take a look at that wound? It’s looking pretty awful ( ... )

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