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[part 2] France/America - vampires anonymous October 25 2009, 18:34:30 UTC

Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=4739530#t4739530

Interview with the Vampire vs. Twilight - before anyone comments that this fill is very cheesy and overdramatic, yeah, I was just trying to follow the prompt to the best of my ability.

Between Dusk and Dawn [part 1/??] anonymous October 25 2009, 18:40:34 UTC

Even before he could see him or smell him, he could feel his father’s irresistible presence through some other unnatural sense. He followed the thrumming in the air eagerly, unable to resist the blood ties that drew his body inexorably to its creator’s embrace. As he tied the boat to the pier and ran back to the mansion, the deep viridian of the Louisiana marshlands melted away into a shadowy green blur, the sound of frogs and cicadas suddenly hushed ( ... )

Between Dusk and Dawn [part 2/??] anonymous October 25 2009, 18:44:10 UTC

The room felt cool and dry compared to the sultry humidity outside, and with a contented sigh, Francis sat on the edge of the four-poster bed, sinking slightly into the down-filled mattress. Encouraged, he quickly took off his boots, then flopped backwards onto the covers, indulging himself in the few luxuries that Alfred owned ( ... )

Re: Between Dusk and Dawn [part 2/??] anonymous October 25 2009, 20:25:23 UTC

Its beautiful! Writer-Anon! :)

Between Dusk and Dawn [part 3/??] anonymous October 26 2009, 05:05:28 UTC

Alfred ducked his head shyly, letting blond hair fall forward into his eyes as he kissed the other man’s cool pale lips once more. Almost hesitantly, for they had never been this physically close after he became a vampire, he slid one leg in between Francis’ thighs, hands nervously unknotting the cravat and loosening the silk shirt.

Still surprised by the intensity of Alfred’s desire, how deep it ran, even stronger than the bloodlust their kind must succumb to, Francis wondered just what he had unleashed when he created his son, if this union of their immortal bodies would change the nature of their already unique bond somehow.

For now, he allowed the boy to kiss his bared throat and graze sharp teeth across his jugular, gasping in delight as Alfred bit down at the shoulder and then the collarbone hard enough to leave bruises on flawless white skin. Moving down a bit, Alfred paused long enough to reiterate his disapproval of Francis’ grooming habits, which made the older man snort and laugh.

“Does it really bother you, mon cher“ ( ... )

NOT OP anonymous October 26 2009, 07:37:48 UTC

If I am not mistaken, both master and fledgling cannot read each other's minds, not just the fledgling not being to read the master's mind.. but I could be wrong. It's been a while since I read the Vampire Chronicles.

HOWEVER, that is not important, and I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fill! Please continue Writer!anon! The combination of Lestat!Francis and Louis!Alfred is too tantalizing..

derp, writernon needs to do research anonymous October 26 2009, 20:47:40 UTC

Yeah, I thought that might be the case. Damn. Well, we'll just associate that with the Twilight vampire powers instead of the Interview vampire powers.

Re: Between Dusk and Dawn [part 3/??] anonymous October 26 2009, 08:42:59 UTC

Ha ha, nice!

More soon, please?

Re: Between Dusk and Dawn [part 3/??] anonymous October 26 2009, 20:48:32 UTC

Thanks, I'll do my best to finish by Halloween. *crosses fingers*

Re: Between Dusk and Dawn [part 3/??] anonymous October 26 2009, 19:35:23 UTC

Mmm~ So hot. *g* And beautiful and, oh. Goodness. Seems much more like IWtV than Twilight (as far as I know, I haven't even finished the first Twilight book) but I'm definitely not complaining. IWtV is already really France/Americaish on its own.

I WAS hoping for a fill with dark and sexy French vampire meeting sparkly American vampire, but this is maybe a hundred times better. Though I wouldn't complain if I got to see the former too. 8Db

yeah, sorry about that anonymous October 26 2009, 20:58:01 UTC

I am still trying to finish Twilight, so I based this more on Interview and what I remember of the rest of the books (not much, apparently). America will eventually channel some Edward, later.

Glad you like it, even though I got a bunch of things wrong. Literary license, literary license.

OP anonymous October 27 2009, 05:09:10 UTC

Oh my, I never expected to find one of my old requests to be filled!
And a great fill it is, so far. :)

And don't worry about the details. It's been a while since I've read Interview myself and when I made that request I was just going by the "stereotypes" of the vampires from each respective novel. (Vampires from Anne Rice's novels being darker, but more romantic/erotic; and vampires from the Twilight Saga being more "make the girls swoon with my dazzling sparkles") :p

The fill fits my expectations perfectly so far so it can only get better from here. OP is cheering you on, author!anon. And thank you for the wonderful fic so far! I can't wait to see more but go ahead and take your time if you need to. ♥

Re: OP anonymous October 28 2009, 04:05:46 UTC

Thank you for the comment, I am so relieved that you approve despite me getting some details wrong, haha. I hope you like the rest of it, it's getting cheesy and sappy, but I wasn't in the morbid/angsty mood, at least not for these two.

Between Dusk and Dawn [part 4/??] anonymous October 28 2009, 20:56:31 UTC

As the last tremors of his orgasm faded away, Alfred reluctantly opened his eyes, not daring to look at his father’s face, not after what he had just done, what he had just said. He bit his lower lip in anxious mortification, a habit from his human life that did not quite suit his current status. But Francis said nothing, only reached up and pulled Alfred closer to lie on top of him, rubbing his broad back with soothing motions ( ... )

Between Dusk and Dawn [part 5/6] anonymous October 28 2009, 20:57:42 UTC

He could not disobey that gorgeous voice, no more than the tides could resist the pull of the moon, and so Alfred moved up and stretched out beside Francis, looking at him expectantly. When Francis pressed two fingers to his lips, he opened his mouth and sucked on them hungrily before they pulled out, and could not help gasping in pleasure to next feel them exploring between his legs, slipping into his waiting body with practiced ease. Alfred tried to keep from squirming around too much, but it was so, so hard, because he had been dreaming of this for too many years, unable to achieve any satisfaction by himself ( ... )

Between Dusk and Dawn [part 6/6] anonymous October 28 2009, 21:14:56 UTC

“Francis, oh Francis,” Alfred whispered, voice wavering in awe as he reached over to pull Francis’ hands away from his eyes. “Look… the sun. Can you see it ( ... )

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