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Spain/Romano: AU: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 06:46:25 UTC

Original Request here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=16723746

Alternate universe where Lovino is 14-16 years old and Antonio is a 20/30-something family friend, and they're in a secret, but consensual, relationship.

Bonus points for Feliciano knowing and actually managing to keep it a secret.

This writer!anon shall do her best! And incorporate the bonus because anon loves a little Italian conspiracy. :3 I hope even if OP!Anon never sees this since it the request was posted in August, that others will like it?

Spain/Romano: AU: Taboo (Prologue part 1) anonymous October 4 2009, 06:52:34 UTC

"Lovino~ Kick it over here ( ... )

Re: Spain/Romano: AU: Taboo (Prologue part 2) anonymous October 4 2009, 06:55:47 UTC

gwar stupid character limit adjk;s"But you look so cute!" the young man explained, grinning. "What's your name?" Before the child could answer, a voice called out to them from the distance ( ... )

Re: Spain/Romano: AU: Taboo (Prologue last part! *pant*) anonymous October 4 2009, 06:57:45 UTC

He let out a small cry of surprise which turned into an outright squeak as the strange teenager gave him a tight hug. He was so shocked that he didn’t think to counterattack, even when he had been put back on the ground. He just stared, his mouth open as Grandpa picked Feliciano up and sat him down on his shoulders, one small leg on each side of Grandpa's neck. "Soooo cuuuute!!" Antonio practically squealed, gazing down at Lovino with affection the child was not used to seeing. "You're so cute, Lovi!" Antonio gushed, "Your face is so red, it looks just like a-" He clapped his hands suddenly, then reached into a lunch sack Lovino had not seen earlier and pulled out a bright red tomato.

"Here you are, chico," Antonio said warmly, taking Lovino's hands and placing the tomato inside the tiny chubby palms ( ... )

1/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 07:00:54 UTC

Anon hopes her writing so far wasn't too bad...Many years later ( ... )

2/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 07:03:01 UTC

He was sitting at the table, working on his homework with Feliciano chattering away on the phone beside him ("And then, and then, I fell asleep and dreamed of pasta! Ve~ Ludwig, are you still there~?"), when Grandpa 'Rome' Vargas burst through the front door with a bag of groceries in each hand. "Boys! You won't believe who I ran into at the supermarket just now!" he boomed, an insanely happy grin on his face, which hadn't aged much despite the passage of time. Feliciano only stopped talking long enough to smile and wave before resuming his conversation, while Lovino shot the old man a dirty look, put on a pair of headphones, and turned the volume on full blast. He didn't notice the stern look that suddenly forced Feliciano to put his phone away or hear anything his grandfather said until 'Rome' yanked the headphones clean off his head ( ... )

3/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 07:06:09 UTC

Just then, his grandfather waltzed in and whisked his guest off to the kitchen, before Lovino could demand any more explanations. He watched this "Antonio" suspiciously as Rome introduced him to Feliciano, feeling a twinge of protective annoyance as he watched his brother hug the guest, who seemed a little too enthusiastic about returning the gesture... Dinner wasn't much more pleasant. Lovino decided he would focus on eating and answer only when he had to, while Feliciano kept up a steady stream of cute that kept him the center of attention while he kept talking, going on and on about his friends Ludwig and Kiku and how much he loved pasta and painting. But Lovino did manage to find out that Antonio was an old family friend of Grandpa Rome's, and that he'd been out of the country for years studying Spanish literature at some high end school on a scholarship and that he'd enjoyed it so much, he was already working on his application to for a graduate program at another prestigious school. "I may not be good at much else," Antonio ( ... )

Re: 3/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 17:43:38 UTC

This is just way too cute! Poor Lovi, with his childhood crush turning into a "disappointment". And I love the bud being symbolic! And bringing back the mentioning of it was a wonderful touch.
I can't wait for more! 8D

Re: 3/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 19:02:42 UTC

Interesting opening, anon! I'm liking where this is going.

If I may be a little picky with your grammar, whenever someone new speaks you should have a line break in the dialogue. So instead of having a solid paragraph where everyone talks it's a little more spread out and it's easier to follow conversations. It's something I had trouble with, too, so yeah.

Sorry, I've taken up all this space talking about grammar. Keep up the good work~

Re: 3/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 20:21:10 UTC

Will do! Thank you for the tip.

and don't worry about the picky/taking up space. I kept thinking something was wrong when I was writing this but couldn't figure out what exactly --got a little too caught up in writing storyline *nervous laugh*

OP! anonymous October 4 2009, 19:52:03 UTC

Oh my god, thank you so much! The wait for this to be filled was definitely worth it, I'm so excited for more! Just like, oh my god thank you thank you thank you, you're the fucking best. ♥

Re: 3/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 4 2009, 20:31:07 UTC

Anon, I am loving this so far. ♥

Hope to see more soon! :-)

Re: 3/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 5 2009, 17:58:04 UTC

oh, wow, this is brilliant. can't wait for more!

4/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 6 2009, 22:52:58 UTC

Wah! Comments! Thank you for the responses reader!anons! I feel so encouraged!

A few days later...

Lovino winced. Gramps was going to KILL him. One would think that he'd be good at Spanish, since he was Italian, and often spoke Italian with Feliciano when he didn't want their conversation to be overheard... But well, some things were similar here and there and some things weren't. And today's pop quiz had been entirely on the things that weren't. Lovino stared at the paper, as if hoping the numbers would reverse themselves into a more acceptable score.

"Brother~~!"

Lovino hastily stuffed the paper into his pocket as Feliciano skipped over to him, waving, his friends Ludwig Weillschmidt and Honda Kiku trailing after him. Lovino's eyes narrowed. Honda was polite enough, so he could tolerate the Japanese boy, but he absolutely hated Ludwig. He still couldn't understand why his younger brother hung around such a tight-lipped, macho, idiotic bastard-who-ate-nothing-but-potatoes all day. But then again, he thought to ( ... )

5/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 6 2009, 22:56:07 UTC

"What... just hit me?"

Antonio reached up and touched the top of his head, where a small paper ball was nestled in his thick dark hair. Gingerly, he unfolded it as he walked down the street toward the Vargas house. His eyes widened.

"¡Dios mio!" he cried, clutching the side of his head. "¡Qué horror!"

The string of rapid-fire Spanish that followed, bemoaning the graphite marks that butchered-nay, slaughtered!-his native language, was cut short as he saw the name in the upper right hand corner: Lovino Vargas."What was that ( ... )

6/? Spain/Romano: Taboo anonymous October 6 2009, 22:57:40 UTC

"WHAT?!"

"It's a good idea, no? I'm very qualified: Spanish is my native language, I've been living in Madrid since I was your age, and I'm also studying Spanish literature in college, so you can ask me anything you want about it ( ... )

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