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As It Ever Was (Japan/mpreg!America, birth of Hawaii) anonymous August 1 2009, 07:59:13 UTC
original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12566026#t12566026

summary of request: Japan and America have postwar sex, America gets pregnant, Japan is a fretful daddy, Hawaii is a baby girl.

This is less fluffy than what OP likely wanted.

The “oars” remark refers to the use of the ‘eiko’ or ‘eko’, which really is used as a weapon in certain Okinawan martial arts. The degree to which Okinawa was integrated into Japan proper at various times can be a divisive topic even now. Following WWII, the US pretty much took over Okinawa, though that became less the case in the 70’s. However, the American military still maintains extensive bases there.Japan had been different, before. They’d worked well enough together, even if Japan was busy being chummy with Britain. Even if Japan thought America was loud and uncouth and America thought Japan was being a pushover trying to take over parts of the Pacific that were rightfully ( ... )

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As It Ever Was 2/3 anonymous August 1 2009, 08:01:34 UTC
He fed Japan, helped him put together a new government - a Nation could live without a government, but it wasn’t too easy, and had a tendency to spawn new Nations - helped him reestablish industry and rebuild. And bandaged his wounds, day after day, while Japan didn’t heal and didn’t heal ( ... )

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As It Ever Was 3/3 anonymous August 1 2009, 08:04:18 UTC
Since Japan bottoming would’ve been flat-out painful in pretty much any position that still let them face each other, America volunteered. Which. Okay, America didn’t sleep around a lot or anything, but Japan was a really good lay, and America didn’t usually even like catching. So they did it a few more times ( ... )

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OP is very pleased~ anonymous August 1 2009, 09:38:36 UTC
I gave up hope on my request, but I was unvbelievably happy to see this in the fill list 8DDD

I don't mind the lack of fluff since it makes the fic much more realistic. I think you did well fitting in the facts with the story. It was clever how you changed it so America bottomed out of convenience. I hadn't really thought of it that way when I was typing out the request but it makes more sense ^^ Lol, I liked the mentions of the other state's daddies XD

Overall really nice fic. Thank you so much for filling it <333 *hands over some pineapple pie, which is pretty damn good imo*

One question though, why was Japan disappointed in Hawaii being a girl? I have an idea why, but I'd like to make sure ^^;

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Re: OP is very pleased~ anonymous August 1 2009, 19:55:21 UTC
Anon's intention was to allude to the general preference for boys in old-fashioned families/mindsets (though modern Japan-the-country favors boys less than, say, modern China).

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Re: OP is very pleased~ anonymous August 2 2009, 09:40:17 UTC
Ah, I see. That's sort of what I thought.

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Re: As It Ever Was 3/3 anonymous August 1 2009, 15:33:02 UTC
Wahh, somebody beat me to the punch! Very bittersweet though. I could understand how things are still a bit tense between them as well. Kiku was also very much in character too!

Also, really good recognition about Kansas (Bleeding Kansas that is). I'm a fan of Mama!Alfred + State-tans and I always believed Kansas had a twin that was still born(Before the state was formed, two forms of government had been established. Just angstin' it up over here!!).

Would anon be offended at all if I were to fill this as well? I'm just taking my sweet time finishing the first chapter

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Different anon-- anonymous August 1 2009, 18:02:27 UTC
--but also someone who was hoping this request would be filled, and would love love love to have more versions.

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Re: As It Ever Was 3/3 anonymous August 1 2009, 19:56:16 UTC
Authornon would not be offended at all if there were to be another fill.

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Re: As It Ever Was 3/3 anonymous August 1 2009, 18:07:40 UTC
I'm so glad this one was filled! I'd been watching it and really wanting someone to do it, then read it'd been done on the fills thread!

Though you claim it isn't fluff, I found it incredibly sweet. ♥

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Re: As It Ever Was 3/3 anonymous August 2 2009, 00:14:37 UTC
...you made me ship it. Your Japan, in particular, is beautifully, painfully spot-on here.

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