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England makes Australia a colony again and Australia is not very pleased. Hope this is what OP was looking for D:
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Poor Australia :(
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Awesome opening, love that you included England's other colonies. Can't wait for more!
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and for a second he forgets what his national anthem is. Was.
I'm Australian and that I must admit was painful to read. I ended up humming our anthem when I finished reading it x_x
*sobs* and New Zealand!! Does that mean the ANZAC treaty is no longer in affect??? D:
Can't wait to read more anon!!! *bookmarks*
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God... I love how Australia doesn't just stop with Canada or America, but instead goes to other nations that could possibly help, and then looks towards the Kiwi and - that last sentence - it was a real kicker. Smacked me right in the gut.
I sincerely hope there's more on the way.
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To anon wanting to fill this too: D: don't not fill this because of meeee. I'd love to read yours too bb. ♥
----------For the next week, Australia doesn’t see England once. He goes out into the streets and sees people suffering from the recession, reduced to begging, and Australia doesn’t know how he’s supposed to help. He’s already starting to lose his tan, and his hair is constantly wet with rain. Not only can he not remember his national anthem, but he forgets the names of his people too. He doesn’t even think to call New Zealand now ( ... )
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Anon. you truly are amazing. I love the tone you've established and it's absolutely heartbreaking to see Australia just forgetting everything about himself that isn't strictly connected to England.
And gah, there is no way you are screwing this up at all! Thank you for filling this anon!
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AMAZING.
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“Listen, you little shit, I made you and I can break you. Got it?” Clutching Australia by the collar, he has no choice but to glare right back at England; never give in, never give in, don’t give in, you’re strong you can do this. He remains quiet and England lets go, picking up the duct tape and ripping off a fairly large piece. “This,” he says as he presses it against Australia’s mouth ( ... )
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The patriot in me had me pumping my fist and hissing, "Fuck yeah! You tell him, Oz!" when I read that. You've really made me so happy with this fic~
I really like where this going. You've packed so much feeling into this and the tone is dead-set perfect. I like how even though Australia's forgetting, he just won't give up. I love how the other nations haven't forgotten him (especially New Zealand - I hold much love for our southern brother). I love how you haven't turned Oz's siblings into bad guys because of their decisions.
Oh God, I can't wait for more. I must see how Australia gets out of this (and maybe how he recovers?).
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I am curious though if Gallipoli is going to be brought up since that was the mile stone that pushed Australian's away from the British Empire (since then our military down right refuses to be under British command) in the first place.
Ahh its good to know New Zealand is checking up on him! Can't let our southern brother forget 'bout him! America and Canada <3 I some how get the picture if this really did happen in real life, Americans wouldn't just stand by and let it happen (since our country's have had a strong alliance since WWI)
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And I personalty wouldn't stand for being made a colony again, and i'm sure most of Australia would be like minded, no need to depend on foreigners when we have true blue Aussies.
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