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World/US Financial Crisis gangbang anonymous July 24 2009, 00:42:54 UTC

original post all the way from part 3 + pgs 1-6: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=5492951#t5492951
part 4 pgs 7-10: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=8292802#t8292802
part 5 pgs (linked 1-10)11-14: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=11830026#t11830026
prompt: America gets punished for causing global recession!

pages 15-17 anonymous July 24 2009, 00:56:32 UTC

I honestly did see part 5 maxing so soon.

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Re: pages 15-17 anonymous July 24 2009, 01:28:57 UTC

Is it just me, or is Alfred looking younger than ever in a couple of these panels? He looks so vulnerable... *whimper*

artist!anon anonymous July 24 2009, 01:52:25 UTC

haha I am changing the way I draw him a bit. Maybe he looks younger cause his glasses is off!

Re: pages 15-17 anonymous July 24 2009, 02:57:35 UTC

Ooh, I love the biting! Because it means America still has some spirit in him, and I like that. <3 Utterly lovely art anon!

Re: pages 15-17 anonymous July 24 2009, 03:31:27 UTC

Fight on, America! Fight on!!

Yay! America can still rebel!

But you know, I thought he was broken last time. One would think he wouldn't be mentally capable of rebelling at this point...

Hmm... But actually, considering his face in the last panel, he looks like a pouting child. Once again! He looks so young!

But he also looks so resigned... TT_TT

Am-America...

Re: pages 15-17 anonymous July 24 2009, 04:39:12 UTC

Reading this is like watching your best friend you got in a fight with get into a horrible car accident that caused major disfiguration caused by two of drunk best friends of that best friend.
Incredibly hard to see and stomach, but you can't tear your eyes away...
It gets harder and harder to read this, but I don't want to stop.
I feel more and more helpless, it's a rape fic I actually feel guilty reading.
You did a very good job...XD
OH god, how am I going to read the written version if I feel genuine guilt reading this?
You did your job too well....
Now I need to go eat guilt food, sorry about the lame metaphor I just entitled to let you know how it made me feel... -.-'

Re: pages 15-17 anonymous July 24 2009, 07:28:49 UTC

Ohgodohgod girl!boner in 3...2...1...

TasteOfRevenge author here anonymous July 25 2009, 04:15:08 UTC

... OH. MY. GOD.

I think I was actually holding my breath here. OMG, this was GORGEOUS. And - ahdjshfdjdg France, yes, that makes so MUCH SENSE. France *would* bring that up, woudn't he? There was a lot of bad feelings from both parts back then. The slap... that was new, but I think it makes sense. I was actually more surprised at the bite. I didn't know he still had fight left in him by now. Makes me wonder what you have planned for the next pages - of course, if he tries that with Russia my brain will break, lolz)

And awww, his face. I love the way you make the expressions. I love when they hold his face, and I loved the reference to the pipe (OUCH!) and I love you madly.

(I still want to make a community when this is over- I don't even know how many authors are living in this universe now, lolz. Now I kinda think someone shouldwrite the nations planning for this)

Artist!Anon anonymous July 25 2009, 05:33:42 UTC

Thank you!! I did want to add other reasons besides the recession into this so, yes, France is just perfect for that! Biting is practically the only thing America can do being so restrained and outnumbered. Even though most of the time his mouth is being stuffed haha, but yeah the bite is definitely part defending his bosses, and part for reminding them what they did to him. Bites don't heal over night! France will need to get that checked out actually since he knows what that mouth has went through lol

( kinda like a prequel? that's actually a pretty good idea! Have you figured out a name for the community yet? Maybe like Rape of America? lol I'm bad at names)

WRITER!Here anonymous July 25 2009, 20:56:10 UTC

France will need to get that checked out actually since he knows what that mouth has went through

OMG YOU ARE SO MEAN and this totally made me LOL more than it should, poor Alfred. XD I'm SO going to quote that when I reach that part.

(Re the title: one of the authors (I think it was Retribution!Writer) suggested Financial Crisis... this name amuses me, because it sounds so serious even if the whole thing is actually about rape. We can wait and see if the someone has another suggestions and then we’ll pick the best one. I suck so much at titles you can’t even imagine.)

PS: Am I the only one more disturbed and guilty about the revenge fics than this one? D:

Re: WRITER!Here anonymous July 26 2009, 00:02:10 UTC

haha, I was being half serious! But now I'll be looking forward to this part from you! I will definitely LOL HARD.

Financial Crisis can be a default name in case we don't come with anything. It sounds better than ... Second Depression. You feel more disturbed by the revenge fics? xD But in a good way right?? fapfapfap....

in terms of a comm name... anonymous July 26 2009, 11:07:32 UTC

I'd suggest that you include either "hetalia" or "aph" somewhere in the title, to make the fandom aspect clear just from that both for people who want to find it and people who don't (I can't tell you how many times I've gone to a comm, only to find out it's some fandom completely irrelevant to my needs--very frustrating!). Also, I'm not sure that you want to claim "financialcrisis" as the comm name, given the seriousness of economic conditions themselves; non-fandom people coming across it might find it disrespectful (as someone affected materially by the crisis, I kind of would...). On a similar note, I wouldn't put rape in the name of the comm, either (I think that was a joke, but wanted to say so just in case).

Off the top of my head, here are a few suggestions:

aph-econcrisis (aphfinancialcrisis is too long, alas)

aph-guilty (for what was written on Alfred's forehead?)

aph-comeuppance (in a way, the rapists think Alfred is getting his comeuppance for his failings with the economy and in turn they get their comeuppance in the ( ... )

Re: in terms of a comm name... anonymous July 28 2009, 00:07:56 UTC

artist!anon here

Thank you, lovely anon! I feel silly that the idea of putting
"hetalia" or "aph" in the commu name escaped my mind! I really like your name suggestions too. It be good to keep it short so maybe aph-crisis could be a title as well. OR aph-recession? I think I had Guilty as the title in the previous parts but I think its kind of a borderline cliche title. Still not sure what to really title it, haha.

Re: in terms of a comm name... anonymous August 1 2009, 21:06:43 UTC

Eeeeek, I can't believe I didn't think of putting Hetalia first. I feel so silly now. D:

Anyway, APH-crisis is a good idea, I think. It's my favorite so far. ^_^

Re: WRITER!Here anonymous January 17 2010, 03:26:31 UTC

This Ameranon likes the revenge fics~
this anon likes crazy America~

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