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Part 5: drunk!England confesses his feelings to America anonymous July 23 2009, 22:00:07 UTC

Request:
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=14344970

Author!anon somehow thinks this is not exactly what OP wanted, so please consider this a caution and an apology. orz

darts of pleasure (1/?) anonymous July 23 2009, 22:01:13 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part oneArthur knocks back his drink, noting that the whiskey goes down so very smooth, hardly burning at all this time. He motions the barkeep for another one and fishes in his pocket for a tip before turning to weave his way through the party. He can't even remember the occasion. A celebration in honor of someone or something, the birthday of a foreign prince, perhaps, or the anniversary celebrating victory in some battle or other. There have been so many through the years, they're all starting to blur together ( ... )

darts of pleasure (2/?) anonymous July 23 2009, 22:02:55 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part twoThen Alfred pulls back and looks at him. The music seems so distant, Arthur hardly hears it. A curious roar is muting it, and he realizes it's his blood, his heart pumping it through his body faster than normal. Alfred's still just looking at him, and Arthur realizes he's just looking at Alfred ( ... )

darts of pleasure (3/?) anonymous July 23 2009, 22:04:29 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part threeAlfred isn't in the first gents Arthur finds. He wanders down a hallway, around a corner, up a flight of stairs, and down another hallway. He's lost the party, lost track of himself, and he hasn't found Alfred. When he comes to the next corner he spies an exit sign and wonders if perhaps he shouldn't just take the hint ( ... )

darts of pleasure (4/?) anonymous July 23 2009, 22:08:00 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part fourArthur starts to say something, an apology or a curse or both, but Alfred hushes him. "It's okay," Alfred whispers in his ear, pressing a kiss to his neck before he slips down to his knees. He unzips Arthur, peels his clothing down, and takes him out. Holding Arthur's still semi-hard cock carefully, Alfred dips his head and begins cleaning it with his tongue, swiping along the surface of the head until every trace of come is gone before taking Arthur into his mouth, suckling and making these sounds in his throat, whimpering-dear god, Alfred on his knees, whimpering with the desire to give him pleasure-oh, it's too much; too much, and not enough. Arthur's head falls back, eyes closed, body arching, pushing his hardening cock deeper into Alfred's mouth. His own mouth moves, silently at first, and then the words come out in a whisper, praying: "Alfred, oh god Alfred, oh fucking jesus ( ... )

darts of pleasure (5/?) anonymous July 23 2009, 22:10:35 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part fiveBut it is happening. Arthur pulls his hand from Alfred and tells him so ( ... )

darts of pleasure (6a/?) anonymous July 23 2009, 22:16:29 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part 6a"It's hard and swollen in the curve of your hand," Alfred says, "and when you brush your thumb over the head, so lightly you're almost not touching me, you feel the slickness ( ... )

darts of pleasure (6b/?) anonymous July 23 2009, 22:23:57 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - 6bAlfred is inside him to the second joint and Arthur can't imagine how he's going to get his cock in, because this one finger is uncomfortable enough. Then Alfred's fingertip bumps against Arthur's prostate, and Arthur makes another guttural sound, squirming with pleasure. "There," Alfred says, and Arthur can hear the smile in his voice, "that's pretty good, right? Kind of awesome?" Another delirious nudge. "You want a little more ( ... )

Re: darts of pleasure (6b/?) anonymous July 24 2009, 00:58:09 UTC

holy shit anon~ *squirms* I need to go change panties now
fuck this is so hot. and i love the way alfred tries to convince arthur it's a dream.

damn this is one of the hottest things I've ever read.

ps. LOVE your title. I was listening to that song while reading this. XD

Re: darts of pleasure (6b/?) anonymous July 24 2009, 03:52:14 UTC

Author!anon is delighted you're enjoying this, and thanks you very much for reading! My idea with the dream is that for Arthur, if it's not real then it's okay to be doing it; and for Alfred, it's something to strive for. I'm not sure if all that came through, but I'm happy you liked that part.

And yes--Franz Ferdinand are great, aren't they? ♥

Re: darts of pleasure (6b/?) anonymous July 24 2009, 04:41:45 UTC

Totally got through to me! God, those two. XD

omg, yes they are. ♥

Re: darts of pleasure (6b/?) anonymous July 24 2009, 02:45:25 UTC

HOLY--

Whoa, this isn't the OP, but obvious!anon is impressed. Beautifully done, I love how you thread certain images throughout the story like the flutter of Alfred's eyelashes and the "this is just a dream" line.

More of this wonderful thing, please, author!anon.

Re: darts of pleasure (6b/?) anonymous July 24 2009, 03:56:16 UTC

Author!anon thanks you most sincerely and is really happy you're enjoying this! ♥ I must confess to being fond of recurring motifs, so I'm especially happy you like some of the ones I'm using in this.

Re: darts of pleasure (6b/?) anonymous July 31 2009, 03:04:11 UTC

"oh fuck" ahahahha
btw, Alfred's eyelash-fluttering made ME get butterflies, just reading that. so.fucking.cute.

s-so hot anon

darts of pleasure (7/?) anonymous July 24 2009, 03:33:03 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part sevenDimples showing now, Alfred leans in, kisses Arthur warmly, and pushes him onto his back. "Tell me if you want me to stop, okay ( ... )

darts of pleasure (8/?) anonymous July 24 2009, 03:35:34 UTC

Darts of Pleasure - part eight

He turns over, watches Alfred licking and sucking Arthur's come from his fingers, and Arthur wishes he were twenty again so he could go all night, fuck Alfred 'til his nose bleeds, 'til the both of them are raw.

Watching Alfred like that and thinking about him like this makes Arthur feel somewhat dizzy, so he closes his eyes for a moment, just for a second, it's only a long blink, he's going to open them again...

They're over at Francis's house after a meeting in Paris, not all of them but some of them. There are a few bottles of wine going 'round; still more bottles are strewn about, empty and abandoned. They're watching an American film-a not entirely bad one, actually. Still, Arthur finds his mind drifting to other things, going in and out of the film ( ... )

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