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Puppet 1/? anonymous July 21 2009, 14:44:11 UTC
Continued from: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=14021642#t14021642
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Just to clear things up, this anon is different from the anon that seconded the prompt... Seconder anon can post another fill of this if anon likes...

Also, lots of flashback for this part... I hope OP enjoys.
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A bird had laid an egg…

“Sister, what’s that?”

It was a fairly large egg with a weird shape…

“Run!”

That was the first thought I had from when it all started…

“We have to get out of here! Mindanao, warn the neighborhood! Tell them to run to safety!”

It was just us in the house… Mr. America had to go to one of his bases because of some trouble…

“BOOM!”I didn’t know what was happening back then. All that I knew back then were the loud cries of our countrymen, the chaos beyond the walls, the earth-shattering explosions, and the sound of Luzon’s ( ... )

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Re: Puppet 1/? anonymous July 21 2009, 15:14:48 UTC
Yes. Philippines-tan. YES.

Great work so far, anon!

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The OP is happy!!! anonymous July 23 2009, 15:41:28 UTC
Oh GOD! You're....you're still writing this?!

I...I thought you stopped! Because, well, the prompt was empty and all till I wandered here. Thank you so much for continuing this, Anon! I love how the story is going.

Poor Luzon~ Now I feel bad for asking such a nasty thing to happen to her, but I can't look away now from this. This is great, Anon! It really is! Please update soon, you're great at this stuff!

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Re: Puppet 1/? anonymous July 27 2009, 13:22:40 UTC
You had me at the title, Anon. I like how each region is characterized - I admit that I had imagined them differently, but it's great to see other awesome interpretations. Looking forward to more installments, especially the actual appearance of Japan and the retribution of the nation.

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Re: Puppet 2/? anonymous July 27 2009, 16:06:56 UTC
“I can’t just stand here! I HAVE TO FIGHT!”

They’re arguing again…

“We can’t right now, we are in no condition to fight… We lack resources.”

Make it stop.

“OF COURSE WE LACK RESOURCES! YOU’RE GIVING IT TO THEM!”

Makeitstop.Makeitstop.Makeitstop.

“Please be patient. I’m doing the best I can.”

Brother…

“Take care of Visayas…”

…don’t leave me alone.

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It was by accident that I saw…

”It’s a pleasure to meet the Pearl of the Orient. I see why Spain is so fond of you.”

Our boss said that sister has come home.

“I have heard a tale from your land, a bout a woman who said that she would give herself to the man that defeats her… I believe, it was from your region, Luzon-san.”

Who is that man? What is he doing to my sister?

“I won…”

Nghhh!Is he biting her ear!? Who would do that ( ... )

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Re: Puppet 2/? anonymous July 28 2009, 11:16:08 UTC
I think your decision of skipping the actual sex scene in this portion was a good choice, especially since you're writing in the eyes of Visayas. I like the way you wrote out the interactions in this part - Japan's taunts to Luzon were particularly striking, especially with using Urduja to add insult to injury.

From what I remember of my history lessons, Laurel is kind of recognized as a president, though not always fondly, as he was kind of sponsored by the Japanese. At the very least, his name is mentioned in the list.

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Re: Puppet 2/? The OP here! anonymous August 1 2009, 04:38:24 UTC
This is amazing! ADFKLSDJSDJSLSKLSKSLKF...

I hope you write more soon, Anon! You're so amazing! I can understand the skipping of the sex scenes, and I don't mind. But there was so much HINTS about it, I nearly died from shock/joy/suspense.

Ahhh...I know the tale of Urduja, and I was so surprised that you used them here! It's actually quite fitting to use that tale, actually. You're incredible, Anon!

This is amazing~ Update soon, please!

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Re: Puppet 3/? anonymous August 14 2009, 17:46:30 UTC
Sorry, it took so long, school was being a bitch and I had to deal with it. Anyway, This part has flashback and present settings. Present setting is in a summit in case you didn't read the prologue or just forgot.

And thanks for the comments, they made me feel very tingly inside.
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“The Summit’s starting in half an hour, get ready.”

Oh right, the Summit…

I go to the bathroom so I wouldn’t have to go during the meeting. The afterwards I touch up my make-up. I hate putting on mascara, my eyelashes are going to be extinct if I put them on…

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“…everyday”

I watch as my sister puts on her make-up. Her long, straight black hair, now a curly bob hanging just above her shoulder.

She’s going to her job.

“I’ll be back by midnight, so be good for yaya…”I watch as my sister walks out our door hanging on an old man’s shoulder ( ... )

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The OP!Re: Puppet 3/? anonymous August 26 2009, 06:51:33 UTC
F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5F5!

I'm so sorry for not checkig up on this as soon as possible! This is great, Author!Anon! It really is. Thank you so much for taking your time out of school and studying to do this little request. It means a lot to em.

I would LOVE to know who that bastard who was hurting Visayas' older sister. RAEG! Honestly, I feel bad for the older sister, she had to go through much, if you think about, with the EDSA and corruption and all.

I really agree with you and 'parents hating PAGASA being wrong, but not us students!' comment. >.>;;

Hope you update soon, Anon! You're amazing at this! I would love to see all three triplets in present time.

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