Eeee. Eeeeee. Thank you! So many kinds of shiny, and I am full of happy and squealing. I really liked the rain imagery, and the different chains they both wear. Thank you, thank you!
SHINIES. This was beautifully done, I loved it, and I loved the imagery you brought into it with the rain and the dungeons. =D Much thanks for brightening my day with this!!
That's brilliant. I love the differences between them, and the constant mention of the rains gives it a lot of ...texture, really, is the best word I can think of. And the fact that Fran shows up at the end - with Ashe's approval - is just the perfect ending to the situation. LOVE.
I have a lot of trouble writing Balthier without Fran (assuming it's not pregame backstoryfic) or vice versa -- so I wasn't surprised at all when, while I was writing, she turned up to 'rescue' him. ♥
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The way they're each bound, in their own way -- definitely my favorite part of doing this one.
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I have a lot of trouble writing Balthier without Fran (assuming it's not pregame backstoryfic) or vice versa -- so I wasn't surprised at all when, while I was writing, she turned up to 'rescue' him. ♥
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