I loved, loved, LOVED that. WxM is one of the best pairings to write about in the Trigun fandom, and you pulled it off so eloquently from Millie's point of view.
One little mistake is that in the very first sentence, the word "once" is repeated. But other than that, it's all good!
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Thank you muchly. This is a wonderful little bit, made that much more so by being from Milly's point of view. ^_^ Well done!
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One little mistake is that in the very first sentence, the word "once" is repeated. But other than that, it's all good!
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I'm so glad you liked the fic. It was fun to write.
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I also loved this line as it was so simple yet expressive:
Then, after a few months of knowing Nicholas Wolfwood, Milly decided she didn't have to ask anyone about love anymore, because she knew what it was.
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