Comments | het_challenge: Fic: Take a Break (FFXII, Penelo/Larsa, for agelessdrake)

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Fic: Take a Break (FFXII, Penelo/Larsa, for agelessdrake)

May 01, 2007 00:08

Title: Take a Break ( Read more... )

final fantasy 12, anime_angel_ash, recipient: ageless drake, molotov_cockroach

Comments 7

lassarina May 1 2007, 23:16:10 UTC

*rolling* Oh, Gabranth. That's so fabulously him, to just flail upon walking in on them, and that entire moment is adorably awkward. So well done. ♥

anonymous May 2 2007, 03:47:27 UTC

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW ANNOYED I AM TO HAVE TO LOG OUT SO THAT I CAN COMMENT AND BE ALL SEKRIT EVEN THOUGH WE BOTH KNOW WHO THE HELL WE ARE RESPECTIVELY.

One: there were a few grammar things. I will not murder you for these, as I am far too pleased at HAVING PENLAR.

Two: POOOOOOOOOOOR BASCH!GABRANTH.

Three: ahahahaha, that last line, you slay me. Penelo is such a wonderful, saucy lady-pirate. Yay!

~Ageless Drake (AHAHA, BASCH!GABRANTH; I WILL SEE YOU AT SCHOOL/TALK TO YOU IN ABOUT THREE SECONDS

kilraaj May 2 2007, 14:59:30 UTC

Simultaneously, Penelo crossed her arms over his chest and flung herself down at Larsa’s side

Her chest, right? At least, it would be a little awkward for her to have her arms there while at his side.

I really liked this. And poor, poor Larsa, he’s already paranoid! XD His reaction to Penelo capturing him was really cute.

anime_angel_ash May 5 2007, 13:31:19 UTC

artemischan May 2 2007, 23:27:10 UTC

Cute! I was giggling madly, especially when Gabrasch walked in the door. Love it!

threewalls May 3 2007, 04:40:28 UTC

This is lovely: the mixture of sensuality and humour, plans superceding plans, both Larsa and Penelo grown into adult lives and responsibilities, and of course, 'Gabranth' would arrive as cavalry if suspicious noises came from the Imperial bedroom.