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Firefly: "Fixing What Ain't Broken" (Simon/Kaylee)

Apr 29, 2007 12:27

Title: Fixing What Ain't Broken
Fandom: Firefly
Pairing: Kaylee/Simon
Author: Trillium aka ( Read more... )

recipient: mooglepuff, trillium, firefly

Comments 7

sister_coyote April 29 2007, 20:08:13 UTC

Oh, this is so charming! I love the way you show Simon's inept but well-meaning approach to... well, everything -- and I love that he's regretful but not angsty. And Kaylee's sweetness, too. I think what I like best, though, is the way you work in all the characters, Wash's sense of humour and Zoe's badass-ness and Jayne ('voodoo genius powers,' hee!) and Mal, tetchy but good-hearted, and River's non-sequitors and Book's insistence on doing the right thing and Inara, dressing Simon up like a girl, oh yes. Lovely! ♥

sister_coyote April 29 2007, 20:36:02 UTC

Thanks you so much! I’m glad you liked this. I worked hard to make sure each character got a little bit of screen time; I’m happy that it worked.

Thanks for your comment!

sister_coyote April 29 2007, 20:37:14 UTC

I'm Trillium, by the way - I forgot to sign the above comment. ^_^

icedark_elf April 30 2007, 00:54:43 UTC

Oh, this is awesome.

I was rewatching Firefly earlier, and this it perfect. Poor Simon. He's so my favorite, thus seems doomed to be kinda dorky. *pets him*

Plus side, I got a friend hooked on FF, so the love spreads. I'll have to point this fic out to her.

redbrunja May 7 2007, 19:06:42 UTC

Thank you so much! For some reason, Simon was the easier character to get into his head - I think because I can relate to being the kind of dork around all these cool people (although he cetainly has his moments. *remembers the entiretly of Ariel*

Awesome! Share the love! I'm also in the process of converting someone of firefly.

Thanks for reviewing!

anonymous May 1 2007, 03:00:57 UTC

He moved from one to another, feeling graceful in a way he only did with instruments in his hand, and never on a dance floor.

That's just lovely. There were so many little gems in here that had me kicking my feet. I adore that everyone got a bit of 'screentime'. Thank you so very much for writing this for me!!

-mooglepuff

redbrunja May 7 2007, 19:01:51 UTC

Thank you!

I wanted to give Simon his moment to shine, since I was kind of giving him a hard time in this. I worked hard to make sure that everyone got a little screen time, so I'm really glad that you liked it.