When Did Your Heart Go Missing?

[herverylowness]

When Did Your Heart Go Missing?
Rating: R Pairing: Matt/Dom
WARNINGS: Angst, Character death, suicide
Summary: One last reflection at the end of the day.

A/N: I shouldn't be allowed to write at 3:30 in the morning. And I apologize to Rooney for stealing the title from your song. It's happier than this fic at least.

Comments

[hyperdarkchoc92]

Ugh...this was heartbreaking ! *cries* poor Dom :( x

[herverylowness]

Right there with you on that sentiment hon.

[miss_ariake]

Why did I have to be listening to Mad World as I read this? O_O I'll be right back, while I go cry my eyes out and then re-read it again.

You weren't here anymore. And my heart was still in your keeping.

That line really hit me the most, not that the rest of the story didn't also send a shiver down my spine. These emotions are written so well, and at first read through, I just wanted to hug you. I still do and I wish I could do more to keep a smile on your face.

Very powerful and a little terrifying to consider... incredibly heartbreaking work, my dear. <3

*hugs*

[herverylowness]

Christ, if I'd been listening to that I'd bee crying too!

I'm glad you enjoyed this dark little foray into my head. And here's hoping it's not reality!

-hugs-

[farawisa]

*wipes away the tears*

so sad. but beautifully written.

[herverylowness]

Thank you so much. I was concerned because it's not my typical stuff, I'm usually more light-hearted.

[starlight_myth]

I saw the title and immediately I hummed the Rooney song but then I read AN and :'(

This was so heartbreaking. But the emotions were so well written and I really felt my heart going out for Dom.

But that last time.. I could taste that ash, like too many cigarettes smoked.

That was my most favourite line. This was beautifully written. I've always thought of a happier Belldom story based on When Did Your Heart Go Missing. It's such a fantastic song!

Loved this! *hugs*

[herverylowness]

Yeah, the Rooney song is pretty pop sounding.. but the lyrics are very sad too. Actually, not that far off from Mad World. I mean, the original is a bit pop but the Gary Jules version is haunting.

I seem to have a theme with titling stuff after music don't I?

[head_o_rainbows]

babe you know my feelings on this and i'm gonna leave it at that. I love you so much

[herverylowness]

I love you too Bells. Thank you.