OOC CRITIQUE

[herr_doktor906]

I've seen a lot of these go up, so it's time for me to jump on the bandwagon. The only way I'm going to get better is if you guys tear me apart critique me, so I have to ask it.

How am I doing?

Comments

[crocketlauncher]

I think you're doing FANTASTIC. I really enjoy how you handle his accent! It has been fun to read out loud sometimes, haha. I love what you've been doing with the character. A+ GOLD STAR

[herr_doktor906]

WHOO! Aww, thanks love.

[fyi_paranoia]

You're doing wonderfully! I'm impressed with how regularly you post despite your frankly hellish schedule. I also love the way you're playing up your Medic's guilt, it's fantastic, and gives him some great depth.

Wunderbar.

[herr_doktor906]

Oh, good. I was worried I was messing with it too much. I've been really working on his backstory, so hopefully I'll get that up soon.

Vielen Dank. :)

[l_espionrogue]

I agree with Solly, Medic's accent is awesome. XD And yeah, you're doing a great job with him! Keep up the good work! :D

[herr_doktor906]

Fantastic. Glad you approve!

[doktorvonstross]

I think you are a fantastic Medic, and as we've said before, I love the personality contrast between our characters. Yours is so wonderfully wracked with guilt--but it's not too much, just a delightful sprinkling that, like Paranoia said, really adds depth to your character.

I am quite interested to read your Medic's backstory as well. I look forward to it. ;)

I'm talking too much again, haha. Point is, you're doing a fantastic job. I request the highest of fives. :)

[herr_doktor906]

I'm almost done with the backstory. I just need to sprinkle some magical awesome dust on it and research a few more things about WWII, but it should go up relatively soon. With how awful my schedule is... maybe I'll make it a Christmas special. I don't know.

You get the highest of fives!! *YEEAAAHHHHHH!!!*