I've seen a lot of these go up, so it's time for me to jump on the bandwagon. The only way I'm going to get better is if you guys tear me apart critique me, so I have to ask it.
I think you're doing FANTASTIC. I really enjoy how you handle his accent! It has been fun to read out loud sometimes, haha. I love what you've been doing with the character. A+ GOLD STAR
You're doing wonderfully! I'm impressed with how regularly you post despite your frankly hellish schedule. I also love the way you're playing up your Medic's guilt, it's fantastic, and gives him some great depth.
I think you are a fantastic Medic, and as we've said before, I love the personality contrast between our characters. Yours is so wonderfully wracked with guilt--but it's not too much, just a delightful sprinkling that, like Paranoia said, really adds depth to your character.
I am quite interested to read your Medic's backstory as well. I look forward to it. ;)
I'm talking too much again, haha. Point is, you're doing a fantastic job. I request the highest of fives. :)
I'm almost done with the backstory. I just need to sprinkle some magical awesome dust on it and research a few more things about WWII, but it should go up relatively soon. With how awful my schedule is... maybe I'll make it a Christmas special. I don't know.
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Wunderbar.
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Vielen Dank. :)
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I am quite interested to read your Medic's backstory as well. I look forward to it. ;)
I'm talking too much again, haha. Point is, you're doing a fantastic job. I request the highest of fives. :)
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You get the highest of fives!! *YEEAAAHHHHHH!!!*
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