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Puella Magi Madoka Magica, Homura/Madoka: Coming Home]

Aug 17, 2011 00:27

Title: Coming Home [FF.net Link]
Fandom: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Genre: Drama/Romance
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Homura/Madoka
Word Count: 4,701
Summary: She’d definitely come to find Homura’s presence, which was like a welcoming beacon amidst all the chaos of time, a place to return to.
Notes: Spoilers for the series. Takes place post-series ( Read more... )

pairing: homura/madoka, !fanfic: oneshot, *fandom: puella magi madoka magica

Comments 5

mayurasan August 17 2011, 16:08:36 UTC

Yay, you finished it! I really like it. You did a great job with Madoka and Homura's characterization and there's lots of little parts I liked (like the chocolate cake bit XD ) I also really like the way you decided to end it <3

dropsofgleam August 17 2011, 20:30:10 UTC

What can I say, this is so lovely. =D

pantstacular August 18 2011, 06:30:51 UTC

This was perfect. This was just about anything I could ask in a fic for this series. You had such a wonderful grip on the characters and had the voices just right. I really like the logic that you went with for this fic it makes perfect sense and still keeps with the feel and ideals of the story. I love their relationship and how you present it. It's so believable, sweet, and just plain adorable. I loved the pace of this story and thought the ending was great. I will admit that I did want more though. It was, in my mind, a great post series interpretation and I loved it so much.

sailorptah August 20 2011, 06:30:06 UTC

Madoka: ditz goddess of time, space, and Homura-stalking.

Magnificent, sweet, and shippy. I love it :D

rosetteroulette September 9 2011, 08:53:10 UTC

This is such a late comment, and for that I apologize. (I was waiting until I finished the series before reading this.)

This? Was wonderful. It's the happy ending I wish we could have gotten for the series. I loved it all; how they had chocolate cake, how Kyoko wanted to become a chef (of course! XD), their night together, and them visiting Kyoko and Mami at the cafe.

And you worked in the romance really well too. When Homura wakes up and still sees Madoka, I got very emotional.

And of course, after the first kiss:

When Madoka stepped back, she dropped her gaze to the ground and mumbled, “Sorry it took me so long to realize how you felt, Homura. I’m a bit dense sometimes.”

I loved that. XD