[Axis Powers Hetalia, America/England: Alfred Jones and the Lost City of Gold 6/?]

[herolessons]

Title: Alfred Jones and the Lost City of Gold 6/? [FF.Net Link] [ Previous Chapters]
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: America/England, Poland/Lithuania, Tony
Word Count: 3,457
Summary: Sequel to Alfred Jones and the Curse of the Pharaoh. America and England are back again on yet

Comments

[ubermidget]

Hooray, an update! This is a cracking good story, I love how you switch between what is happening with England and America in the jungle and Tony, Lithuania and Poland back home. “Our coconuts are filled with rainbows, beware them!” really made me laugh, that's a very funny translation! How you write England and America is adorable, they sound like such a cute and protective couple!

[abarero]

Thank you very much for reviewing!

I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed it :)

[abarero]

Even aliens have bad translators XD

I'm glad you enjoyed Amarum and England's magic!

[abarero]

Thanks! Next part's up now :)

[nutburger]

YES AN UPDATE

I sense shit is going to go down soon. But all of the fluff in this chapter was just perfect. Tony, Lithuania, and Poland were just precious.

"Our coconuts are filled with rainbows, beware them!” LOLOLOLOL

And England and America were being cute as always~ I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! <3333333333

[abarero]

Thanks for your reviews! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

[phox99]

You know, you have a lot of really great elements that you have going on in this story! But I have to say my favorite is them arguing over the bear's name! It's just that extra level of cuteness!!

[abarero]

Glad you're enjoying that bit. :)