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Sep 18, 2005 06:40

Part 6 of my ongoing Sparrabeth series, I've decided to call it Of Black Sails and Ivory Towers. Gimme feedback and I'll love you for always. It's shorter than the last bits, but I took care of the things I needed to, and now the plot will obviously shift a bit.

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geekmama September 19 2005, 11:22:47 UTC

Jack's little speech made me smile. And his surprise that she accepted.

Great final line, too.

I enjoyed this so much. Thank you!

heroics September 19 2005, 22:42:41 UTC

You're welcome. XD Glad to have some feedback, damn.

Ah well, I suppose it's alright.

Thanks again. :D

captsparrow4evr September 20 2005, 09:31:18 UTC

I just wanted to encourage you to keep going. I'm sorry to say I haven't been reading your fic all along but decided to give this section a whirl. The problem with PotC fan-fic is that drabbles/short-short stories get all the feedback. Those of us who post longer stuff get a few die-hards but *shrug* we just have to keep going for ourselves. It also doesn't help that it seems about 75 percent of the fans dislike Elizabeth. It's nothing against your writing because what I've read of it is good work.

BTW, I liked the repetition of Dreaming, for a child, is almost like breathing. It worked very well.:)

heroics September 21 2005, 00:12:08 UTC

Thank you, I know how it goes, it's just sort of nice to get feedback. I don't wanna come off as a ..... something not good. I think most writer's would agree on that point.

Anyhow, I'm glad you liked this bit, the repetition was actually all I had for awhile, and the rest sort of fell into place.

tephroliah September 21 2005, 17:46:40 UTC

Sorry I got to this so late. :\ Been a crazy past few days, not been on. Beggin' your pardon. But anyway...

Jena my looove :D. You are positively fantasmigorical. And not just because your writing is a-frickingmaaazing. There's um.. all that other stuff, too. XD

No, really. You rock annnd.. You should be happy. Hopefully I'll catch you online sometime.

(P.S. Lost tonight. WOOT WOOT.)

khylarenelf July 9 2006, 07:12:24 UTC

Oh, I do hope you're going to write more. This is just so perfectly lovely. Well written and plotted, characters true to form. Brilliant. I loved it.