Fic: Here You Are, Now - for Ladybug218

[comeon_eileen]

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Here you are now: the phone dangling at the edge of your fingertips and threatening to fall, your mouth slack open, your heart stopped completely. You feel like you’ve been run over again, only this time you don’t get the benefit of forgetting the actual crash. It stays with you like a movie in

Comments

[tinylegacies]

Oh, wow, that was an absolutely incredible look at Heidi. I loved that she took charge.

This line, particularly, resonated as being *so* very IC: It would be crueler beyond measure if, after so many years of trying to be like Jackie Kennedy, this was how you finally accomplished the feat.

Thank you so much!

[comeon_eileen]

I'm glad you liked it! I definitely tried, lol! And yay - that was my favorite line, too.

[kattahj]

This was really awesome. I like seeing good Heidi fic, and this exceeded expectations. Also, I'm with both of you on the favourite line. :-)

[comeon_eileen]

aww. yay! i am pleased to have pleased (and shared the heroes!love)

[takethesky87]

A really beautiful piece. The ending is really fitting and a great finish. I like also your choice of 2nd person narrative, which can be hard to pull off but is well done here. Great job! :)

[comeon_eileen]

hey, thanks so much! i am glad you enjoyed it!

[comeon_eileen]

aww, thanks! i'm glad you liked it! also, i quite like your icon. hee!

[comeon_eileen]

ooooh, and also! thank you for telling others! you are too kind.:)

[comeon_eileen]

hee! thanks for liking it so much! and i am quite honored to be added to your rec list. yay! thanks even more, haha.