She Doesn't Have To Know

Dec 14, 2007 14:42

Title: She Doesn’t Have To Know
Author: Greens
Rating: R/NC17 (to be safe)
Words: 518
Characters: Lyle/West
Summary: Claire wasn’t the only one who was afraid of what would happen if people found out who she really was.
Spoilers: None I don’t think
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, Heroes does not belong to me. This makes me sad.
Author's Note: Thanks
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-lyle/west, challenge response, one shot, !r, prompts, -lyle, -west, !nc17

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flwrpwr_vampyre December 14 2007, 21:03:30 UTC
I really enjoyed this, I've been looking forward to reading the West/Lyle ones and this was even better then I expected.

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angary December 14 2007, 21:07:41 UTC
Oh MANOHMAN. Short, sweet, and fantastic!!! Lyst has recently become my fanon OTP now, so ILU. I think it's very realistic that Lyle was worrying about Clairebear the whole time but in the end surrendered himself to West.... that whole love triangle is so perfectly twisted :D

Great job!

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typhon_9 December 15 2007, 05:02:09 UTC
This is like, THE most unexpected pairing ever for me, but I TOTALLY LOVE IT NOW. CONGRATS.

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exitsign December 15 2007, 07:44:40 UTC
Oh, this made me super happy. I love Lyle and completely believe more people should write him. I really enjoyed the way you pulled this off. Expecting things but not knowing what to expect, nervousness and lust and new secrets to keep. I especially liked:

Lyle couldn’t even remember the details, which was strange, because he had always heard of how the first time was always the most memorable. Everything for him was jumbled together.

Because that is just... so perfect. I can't even... Yeah, I just love this. Thanks for writing it. ♥

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^_________^ oximore December 16 2007, 00:49:42 UTC
Lovely and charming! I really love it! Lyle is such an interesting character, and I love the way he wants to protect his sister... the only way he could.

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