Lovely, lovely work here. After watching 2x01, you just long for some of the holes to be filled immediately. This was a really introspective read, but sometimes I felt it told more than it showed. I was somewhat withdrawn in that respect.
Thank you so much! And I totally see what you mean about telling more than showing. I tried to keep that in mind for the next chapter. Thanks SO much for the critique. :)
Lovely, lovely work here. After watching 2x01, you just long for some of the holes to be filled immediately. This was a really introspective read, but sometimes I felt it told more than it showed. It was somewhat withdrawn in that respect.
Actually this is much nicer than I expected. I actually try not to read most slashes, not because I am against it but some of the pairing is so unnatural and it affects my canon vieweing. It is hard not to get drawn to this pairing though.
I'm so glad you gave it a chance! I used to be a really iffy about slash, just because I like to stick to canon as much as possible, but this was just TOO good to pass up. Thanks again for reading!
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'Totally love Matt in this chapter. <3
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And I love Matt always!
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'Totally loved Matt in this chapter. <3
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I actually try not to read most slashes, not because I am against it but some of the pairing is so unnatural and it affects my canon vieweing. It is hard not to get drawn to this pairing though.
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