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The Art of Thinking Quietly

Sep 25, 2007 14:21

Title: The Art of Thinking Quietly (1/4)
Characters/Pairings: Mohinder/Matt (eventually)
Rating: PG
Spoiler alert: Spoilers for 1st Season, particularly the last episode. Eventual spoilers for 2.01
Summary: After the events from last season, Mohinder finds himself taking care of Matt Parkman.

( The whole situation was utterly ridiculous when Mohinder looked back at it... )

author: comedykitty, rating: pg, character: matt parkman, character: mohinder suresh

Comments 5

freak_ling September 25 2007, 23:22:15 UTC

Nice beginning. Looking forward to see how this turns out.

M3, FTW!

comedykitty September 26 2007, 00:19:15 UTC

Thanks!! Still working on how it will turn out exactly :p

M3 = EPIC WIN.

anonymous September 25 2007, 23:48:57 UTC

Lovely start, even though I don't usually read this pairing. I'm just such a fan of reading from Mohinder's point of view. However, I did notice one mistake:

As soon as they got outside, he heard Matt Parkman moan in pain not to far away.

Ought to be "too."

I can't wait to read more.

comedykitty September 26 2007, 00:18:36 UTC

Gah! Thanks for pointing that out! And thanks for checking this out, and I hope I did justice to Mohinder's voice. I really wanted to explore him because he's so damn hot interesting. :) Thanks again! :D

blonderocker September 26 2007, 03:31:34 UTC

more please :) because that is why you rock