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imthelonely_one in heroes_fic

Touch (Ted/Claire)

May 21, 2007 13:37

Title: Touch
Characters/Pairings: Ted/Claire
Rating: PG-13, most likely.
Warnings: None, but Claire is underage.
Spoiler alert: Takes place during "Landslide".
Summary: "Do you know what it feels like to be lonely, Claire?"

I know this is a messed pairing, but it had to be written, OK?
YES I SMOKE A LITTLE CRACK SOMETIMES, SO WHAT

( My first fanfiction EVER omgz )

character: ted sprague, character: claire bennet, author: imthelonely_one, rating: pg13, pairing: claire/ted

Comments 21

threthiel9 May 21 2007, 18:14:24 UTC

Awwww, I love it! (And yaaaay, you wrote it!) Ted is such a woobie; I'm gonna miss the little caveman.

threthiel9 May 21 2007, 18:15:32 UTC

(Oops, meant to use this icon!)

imthelonely_one May 21 2007, 18:35:02 UTC

(TAT) ted...&hearts &hearts

I MISS HIM SO MUCH

imthelonely_one May 21 2007, 18:35:59 UTC

thank you! YES I DID, OMG.

theladyemichan May 21 2007, 19:20:59 UTC

Aw, I love this. I really like Ted and I have had fleeting thoughts of this pairing before, haha. This was so sweet and sad. Ted and Claire have both lost so much! I can almost imagine this really fitting into the show. Great job!

imthelonely_one May 21 2007, 19:26:30 UTC

tysm :D

yeah i didn't want it to be TOO ooc
but i thought about how they both seemed to be lonely.
they've both lost so much, like you've said.

i could imagine them comforting eachother.

plus i want to believe he had at least one nice moment before he died :*(

razycrandomgirl May 21 2007, 19:57:30 UTC

WHOA you really did it! wow. Not bad but I still keep thinking how she's 16,17 and he's like 30 something. :X

imthelonely_one May 22 2007, 03:32:15 UTC

i'm all for it in fic.. but i knew it might bother some people
which is why i didn't make them have sex.

it was like, his last kiss before he died. :(

razycrandomgirl May 22 2007, 03:44:11 UTC

aww! I'm glad Claire could give him that

damedbx May 21 2007, 22:10:59 UTC

OMG!!! i am totally in love your fic!! :D i hope there is more!! aww! i love the bit where it ties in w/ in the show! :D

imthelonely_one May 22 2007, 03:29:55 UTC

i wasn't really planning on doing more to be honest, since ted was captured right after this, but i might do a claire POV ficlet.

like what went through her mind after she found out ted had died.

damedbx May 23 2007, 17:05:49 UTC

aww, really? that sucks that they killed off ted :(, but the show must go on!

like what went through her mind after she found out ted had died

That could work! :) if you are going to write it, i'll defintely read that one! :D

fading_spark May 21 2007, 23:48:40 UTC

Dude, I have been waiting for Ted/Claire for forever. Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it! Wonderful job, I didn't think it was OOC at all. ♥

imthelonely_one May 22 2007, 03:33:26 UTC

Me too, that's why I decided to right one, even though I'm not much of a writer. Thank you so much.