Fic: 1,000 Cranes

[sephirajo]

Title: 1,000 Cranes
Summary: Charlie reacts to seeing Hiro "return."
Rating: PG/PG-13 (For mention of death)
Pairing: Hiro/Charlie
Warning/Spoilers: No real warnings - spoilers for Hiro and Charlie’s relationship and the episode ‘Six Months Ago.’
Disclaimer: I don’t own Heroes or any of the characters therein. I just got hooked on the show and am

Comments

[raissad]

Lovely! I wondered about the time loop aspect of it.

[sephirajo]

Thanks. ^___^ It really blows a fuse in your brain if you start to think about it... He gets close to Charlie who remembers him and loves him, he goes back in time to save her, they fall in love, he shows up to somewhere he's never been and gets close to Charlie who remembers him...

The whole thing is enough to break brains; I hope I captured it well enough.

[darkfire_blade]

You captured this perfectly wonderful. It's gutwrenching in a way. Oh Charlie. I really don't know what else to say except that I loved this and it's going in my memories and I can't really form any words to say.

Iwishshedidn'tdie...

[sephirajo]

I'm glad you liked it. ^___^ It was kind of hard to write, but I wanted to give it a go.

[sephirajo]

I think it's funny that when each one meets the other for the 'first' time, the other has already met and gotten to know the other. It really hurts the brain... when Charlie meets Hiro he knows her already and feels close to her.

When Hiro meets Charlie, she knows him very well and is in love with him...

Somewhere in their few months together in the past he had to give her the low down on why she wouldn't want to jump him if she was working on that day he came into the diner...

[runningondreams]

Wow, you got Charlie down perfectly! And I love your take on the loop ^.^

[sephirajo]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ^___^

[author_by_night]

Nice. :)

[sephirajo]

Thanks for taking the time to read it. ^___^