Art: Untitled by Tbranch

[hermionemods]

Title: Untitled
Artist: Tbranch
Character/Pairing: Hermione
Author: Sita
Fic Rating: Any Age
Note: Crossover with Fullmetal Alchemist

(Art: Untitled)

Comments

[mollyssister]

What a cool concept that Hermione is in another reality after being murdered. The magic or science in her current world is facinating. i didnt understand much any of it but it held my attention none the less. Point me to Fullmetal Alchemist please.

[sarhea]

Sorry for the delay. Any google search will pull up tons of info.
below are a few links.

http://www.edwardelric.com/
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fullmetal_Alchemist
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edward_Elric

[ldymusyc]

Sita: Oooh, I've never read Fullmetal Alchemist, so I know nothing about the fandom, but you managed to incorporate plenty of aspects and explanations without requiring a full knowledge of that. I like the idea of Hermione finding her way in a new world, and creating new magics/alchemies while she was at it. :D One small quibble - when you're writing long lists of things (like the names of the jewels in their brooches), you need to put commas in. Every time I had to stop and re-read the entire sentence to realize it was a list. Other than that, I liked this piece!