Comments | herminekurotowa: Close your Eyes (So you don't feel them)

herminekurotowa

Close your Eyes (So you don't feel them)

Nov 08, 2013 11:33

Title: Close your Eyes (So you don't feel them)

Original author: herminekurotowa

Translation: ashtraythief

Beta/Editor: debauchedsock

Fandom: RPS, AU

Pairings: none

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: I own everything. Except the boys. And the sun. Oh, there are the nice guys with my white jacket.

Title: shamelessly stolen from Eternity by Robbie Williams

Word count: ca. 3,300

Warnings: hooker!Jared, ( Read more... )

hurt!jensen, fic:close your eyes, torture, fic, h/c, jensen, hooker!jared, jared

Comments 10

debauchedsock November 8 2013, 12:41:29 UTC

I just had to read it again LOL, love me some good hurt!Jensen. You already know how much I liked it, so I'll just say THANK YOU for letting me beta this for you. :D

herminekurotowa November 8 2013, 14:14:37 UTC

Thank YOU! You're the most awesome beta I could hope for. ♥♥♥

jj1564 November 8 2013, 16:55:22 UTC

Wow, that was dark and painful, poor Jensen, having to watch Steve die and being tortured by his own parents. Thank you (and Jared!)for saving him at the end!

herminekurotowa November 8 2013, 17:21:25 UTC

Yay Jared! I don't know where that story came from but I thought I should debut with a bang. I'm just sorry I made it on Jensen's expense. Not.

Thank you for reading.

doneitall November 8 2013, 17:25:27 UTC

Wow, this was really intense. Started tearing up. Thanks for that.

herminekurotowa November 8 2013, 19:00:18 UTC

Sorry. *hands hanky*

Thanks for reading.

tipsy_kitty November 8 2013, 19:38:00 UTC

Wow, what a kick to the gut! Poor Steve :(

herminekurotowa November 8 2013, 19:55:45 UTC

When I read the English version for the first time, I got the urge to apologize to Jensen. Maybe it's best that I don't know him in the flesh.

somer November 10 2013, 14:49:20 UTC

Oh. My. Fucking. God!!!! Woman, this was perfect. So dark and sad and so freaking perfect!!! I mean while reading the first half I knew something was up with Jensen and then...

“You know, when I was sixteen I told my parents I'm gay. My stepfather never said anything derogatory about gay people but when I told him that I had a boyfriend, Steve, he asked me if we were having sex and I said yes. He beat me into unconsciousness.”

A punch to the gut. It was like going with the flow and Jared's POV, trying to get a picture of Jensen and then boom!! The flashback was so damn heartbreaking, jesus!!

And I loved the ending. I love these endings which seem to be abrupt but on the other end you have this smile on your face because you just know they're going to make it.

Loved it :D

herminekurotowa November 10 2013, 15:10:44 UTC

Glad you liked it. *beams*

Of course they're going to make it. I'm just glad that Jared's such a nice guy.

♥♥♥