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herewithstupid

Mechanical: Two

Jul 22, 2010 19:04

I'm alive! Have the second chapter to Mechanical. I've got ideas for 3 or so different stories in my head, but this is still priority so there shouldn't be any bigdelays in updates.

Chapter 2- Yer here
Chapter 1- http://herewithstupid.livejournal.com/1097.html
Prologue- http://herewithstupid.livejournal.com/899.html

L4D2 and characters belong to Valve

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mechanical, ellis, l4d2, fanfiction, nick

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herewithstupid July 23 2010, 13:13:59 UTC

No problem :P At that point I think both of them realized that Keith had to know about the bots by then (you know, the bunch of bloodthirsty cyborgs running around? Kinda hard to miss) just threw news, radio, or by encountering them himself or seeing them outside. The chances of him staying in the garage knowing something is going on like that? So Keith probably isn't there anymore. When Ellis was going for him (with unconcious Nick in tow) it was still pretty early in the sudden infection and there was a chance Keith didn't know. But now he probably does, and they're most likely not going to find him. So now they're out to save their own skins. I hope that made sense.

Eh, it's working itself out. And thanks for the comment!

lizardoo July 24 2010, 15:47:23 UTC

oh mann i'm never big on AU fics but this one is great. like, really great. i think your parallels are awesome. diesel engine. yessss I love this fic

also is it bad i fangirled really hard when we got to Coach. because I did. i did a silly little dance in my chair hahahha

herewithstupid July 24 2010, 15:51:39 UTC

Hah, I'm glad you like it :) It's not that much of an AU... just takes place 32 years in the future with a buncha cyborgs. BUT OTHER THAN THAT 8D

Pff, no. I really want to focus on Coach and Rochelle through this fic as well, just cause I believe their characters are good too.

disutansu August 3 2010, 04:32:53 UTC

YES. Oh I really love how you sort of follow the storyline set by the game, and yet you realistically placed them in this futuristic setting with robots instead of zombies. I love this familiar-and-yet-not-so-familiar feeling of this fic. Btw, the Smoker was epic win. *_* I love your description of it and the (ow) hook it has on its tongue, impaling Nick with it. *cringe* Ouch.

Can't wait for more. *_*