[smapfic] Truly the One for Me is You. 11 flashes of afterglow

[hereticpop]

another one, lol. happy smap day.

Comments

[ficofthegoblin]

I love that you've written a whole lot of vignettes about afterglow - I don't see this focused on very often, so it's interesting to read. ALSO YOU WROTE ALL THE PAIRINGS. ALL OF THEM. I am deliriously happy for that alone.

i. The tension between embarrassment and acceptance is just lovely here. I think many of us can relate to that.

ii. Takuya's laugh - you've described it so accurately! Also I kind of love it that it was rough and Goro loved it

iii. Awww Tsu. So insecure! And, yeahhh. I don't have anything productive to say, only that I love NakaTsu.

iv. This one is funny and hot and I like your greedy, lazy Shingo.

v. Goro giving great head is quickly becoming fanon. Gotta love that. AND TSUYOSHI IS STILL SO POLITE. BRB dying of CUTE

vi. ...and Nakai hates how it makes him feel like a fucking girl. o_O This makes me want to write a fic where it's the opposite. Where he loves feeling small... and loves feeling like a girl... fuck you, plot bunnies, I HAVE NO TIME.

vii. Forming coherent sentences seems beyond Tsuyoshi’s

[hereticpop]

in some weird way, afterglow moments [or mornings after] are one of my favourite scenes in fic [or you could call it a kink?]. and i was really asking myself what possesed me 'cause some pairings i don't really ship sexually and didn't have much ideas to write them. and for some others i had too many ideas because i constantly do so it's really really great to hear that it was a good decision after all to include all of them