[smapfic] heartbeats and bed creaks are the sounds of the dawn

[hereticpop]

happy birthday, 25lalalee36
for all the twin-brain Kimura-flails we shared, but more so for being awesome ♥

well, this fluffy little thing that has no flow is the best I could do D:

heartbeats and bed creaks are the sounds of the dawn

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[25lalalee36]

This is so GUH *speechless*
ShinTaku~~~ The world definitely needs more ShinTaku...
Thank you thank you thank you

The parts I like: (now, I can really copy whole bb)
Kimura isn’t sure why he isn’t asleep. There’s a weird heat in the room, it floats like a grainy radioactive haze burning his skin, it would engulf him from knees to the topmost of his head if he stood up. He is lying on the unmade bed, which dips somewhere at his elbow around Shingo. Shingo takes up most of the space, limbs scattered as if they were separate items, t-shirt up across his chest left just like it rolled up when Kimura was wrestling with him trying to make him get up and go home. Shingo wasn’t going home because Shingo was twenty, drunk and he wanted to kiss Kimura’s face.-Tell me how you do it? Hos is it I just can see it, feel it and smell it... (OMG, the image of Shingo usurping Kim's own bed... Cute, cute, cute) and the same goes for the second descriptive paragraph... I.Just.Love.Them

[hereticpop]

my first Shintaku too. was tricky 'cause I really don't know how to write them, so I'm even more happy that you like. ^.^ and that the descriptions work and that things make sense and everything. <3

I KNEW YOU WERE GOING TO APPRECIATE THE NOSE BIT. and come on, it does sometimes look funny. I mean the front view, the front view. side view is always just sexy. I THINK WE'RE FAR ENOUGH INTO KIMURA NOSE STUDIES TO ADMIT IT. /alright, I'm getting carried away about noses here

I might have a thing for writing all those bad breaths and bad hair and flaws and filth and fuck-ups.
Hollywood movies probably...[this is totally offtopic, but: seriously! one of the unrealistic things in movies that has me rage is how women often go to bed/wake up in full, perfect make-up. IT'S SO TERRIBLY STUPID. I would like to ask the person responsible for that, HAVE YOU EVER WOKE UP WITH EYELINER SMEARS ALL OVER YOUR FACE AND PILLOW? it's a shame I'm writing characters that don't often wear make-up, otherwise make-up smears would be another motif I'd abuse ;

[25lalalee36]

It does work better than well ;)

RIGHT? RIGHT? And who couldn't make fun of it when he himself said that he has complex about his nose... /you bet we are... Cause who wouldn't love to study his nose...

OMG, I know, right? I would love to see at least one movie with eyeliners smears and messed hair... Pretty please LOL...(maybe you should make Kim wear some next time...Like, a smexy thing after filming Sexy and the City or doing the drag photosession he did [how I would love to read that :D *hinting hinting*]]

Thank uuuu again *hugs you back*

[hereticpop]

:*

I know, learning that he doesn't like it only fueled my love for his nose, because someone has to cheer on the poor nose, right? it's been doing such a great job for so many years and yet remains underappreciated. [NOT BY US, THOUGH, WE APPRECIATE IT A LOT]

I treated Kimu to some smeared lipstick before, though. and really messed up hair too. Nakai on the other hand... /starts plotting. maybe. well, I'm always plotting anyway/

<3

[ficofthegoblin]

Aaaahhhh ShinTaku! You wrote ShinTaku, there hasn't been any new ones of these for aaaages! So happy. ^_^ I like the way you've written Shingo with a mix of innocence and guile, and also the quiet, sleepy atmosphere.
Also I quite literally laughed out loud at the last two lines. Fantastic.

[hereticpop]

I did and I don't even know how I wrote them. I agree, I want to read more Shintaku, but I really don't feel I can write them. or at least not any dirtier than this, and because I usually write dirtier, it feels weird and duh. they're too sweetly brother-like.
thank you! Shingo was particularly difficult so I am glad you liked the way he turned out. laughing out loud is very appreciated too. <3

[g_pumpkin]

love your writing! guess i need to stalk ur page and read more. fanfic is a new thing for me....hmm....what have i been missing? LOL

[hereticpop]

thank you. ♥

what have i been missing?
mostly gay porn, frankly speaking. but if you're up for that, it'll make me very happy if you read more [and enjoy it]. :)

[celestialraine]

*super glomp* I so love you right now!!!!! I've been craving fro Shintaku fics and 2 days before Christmas I read one. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

I love the story, it's so sweet and serious, and capturing the uh.... innocently devilish being that is Shingo.

But even though I love the whole thing, the last line killed me

thank you so much for this early Christmas present!!!!!