Firefly - Pushing the Line

Aug 17, 2009 22:43

Title: Pushing the Line
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The characters and settings referred to here are not mine, they belong to Joss. No infringement is intended and no profit is made.
Summary: River, Mal, and a bug.
Author's note: I started writing this for a prompt, but it took an peculiar turn, so I'm posting it as is. Set after the movie. Thanks to geek_mama_2Read more... )

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rissy_james August 18 2009, 22:44:46 UTC
All righty, I've spent the last few days lurking around the Firefly fandom, since finally being subjected to the shininess of it all.

This is the first new story that has popped up since my arrival, so I must comment to say that this was fabulous, I enjoyed reading it, and hope there's more where it came from (yes, I know, a great deal of backlogged fic, you're going to be hearing a lot from me in the next little while!)

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hereswith August 21 2009, 20:02:34 UTC
It's a nice fandom and still pretty active, I'm sure you'll have a great time!

Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this! I haven't been writing much this past year, but I have quite a few older fics, which are listed in my Memories. Feel free to browse, and I'd be happy to hear from you again :-)

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clockwork_jo August 18 2009, 23:13:29 UTC
Ah, I love your voicing, it's just perfection. And the mental image of her sat with this bug is so glorious. I love the way she uses the everyday things that happen to alert herself to new philosophies and ways of thinking.

So so good. ^_^

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hereswith August 21 2009, 20:07:46 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the reading and for your kind words!

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tinpra August 19 2009, 02:17:22 UTC
I like the girlishness of River here: peering at the bug, playing with Mal...both girlish in their own ways and both complimentary.

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hereswith August 21 2009, 20:25:29 UTC
I'm glad that worked for you. Thank you for commenting!

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rjsteamboat76 August 19 2009, 02:53:38 UTC
I really emjoyed this. Perfection. =)

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hereswith August 21 2009, 20:25:53 UTC
Thank you very much!

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rjsteamboat76 August 22 2009, 03:31:14 UTC
you're welcome.

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melissa_pbfan August 19 2009, 09:20:44 UTC
This was so cute and beautiful! I loved it.

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hereswith August 22 2009, 19:23:15 UTC
I'm glad you did :-) Thanks for letting me know!

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