Firefly - Playing With Fire

[hereswith]

Title: Playing With Fire

Comments

[djarum99]

He controls his reaction, limits it to a swallow, his lips thinning, marking the line she’s asked to cross, but he can’t hide the inward surge, the heat she wants to curl around.

Mmmm, absolutely delicious, both the imagery and the writing. You've spun their tension fine and true - love them both here, especially River's direct approach and Mal trying to be protective, of his own heart and of hers. Beautiful, as always ♥

[hereswith]

It's such fun to write River like this, all directness and determination, knowing what she wants, and Mal's reaction to it :-) Thanks for picking out that line, and for your kind comments! *hugs*

[luxuria_oceanus]

As always, you kill me with perfection. I'd say, "If only I could've seen this on screen", but honestly, I don't have to because through your writing, I always see it :-) Lovely, as always.

[hereswith]

Your comments always brighten my day :-) Thanks so, so much.

[geekmama]

Hee!! Just fabulous, so deliciously in character.

*hugs you, bouncing*

[hereswith]

*hugs you back*

So kind of you to leave me a review over here. Thank you! ♥

[torn_eledhwen]

I love your River. And I love your Firefly fics. :)

[hereswith]

That makes me very happy. Many thanks :-)

[garnigal]

That was so delicious. I love it when River surprises Mal into doing things he knows he shouldn't, but he really, really wants to.

[hereswith]

She's good at using the element of surprise to her advantage :-) Thank you for the comment, I'm really glad you enjoyed this.